originally posted in:Thorny Guardians
[b][i]As I look down upon the city, I cannot help but feel a chill
The world is torn asunder, but the city slumbers still
Do they not know of the peril upon us? Do they really fear no ill?
It is in Guardians that they place their trust, their faith and hope tranquil
I fear that we will fail them, our days are filled with pain
Another guardian fell today, on Venus, in the rain
His heart was true and full of light, he sang a song of flame
The city will not mourn him, for they did not know his name
As I look down upon the city, the fog fills me with dread
The enemy knocks upon the door, and countless now lay dead
And now that battle is over, here lies Xyor, the Unwed
The chef has a new cake recipe, its soufflé à la Dreg
Our numbers are diminishing, how will we ever survive?
We scout and patrol the planets, it keeps our senses alive
I happened upon a dead guardian, but before I could revive
My ghost exclaimed with urgency, "We've woken the Hive!"
As I look down upon the city, and I recall the things I've seen
I could tell you of the Vandals, and how they serve the Queen
We fought and killed a gate lord, we took his head off clean
I tossed it to her brother, the bastard was still mean
The Vex control a Warmind, our light began to fade
We generated orbs of light, and carried out a raid
The Oracles tried to curse us, we escaped the Gorgon's gaze
We cleansed ourselves of the darkness, Time's Vengeance has been paid
As I look down upon the city, I bite thoughtfully on my lip
But the city slumbers still, now free from the darkness' grip
I summon for my sparrow, I summon for my ship
I stand as a [url=http://www.bungie.net/en/Clan/Forum/511412]Thorny Guardian[/url], with the Thorn upon my hip
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[spoiler]If you have enjoyed this please consider viewing [url=http://www.bungie.net/en/Clan/Post/11690/83193115/0/0/1]my post in the Writer's Corner[/url], where I now place all of my works.[/spoiler]
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Very cool.
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That was great
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This is awesome, keep writing more.
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I really enjoyed reading this. Please continue to write these
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I hate it that thorn gets so much lore then any other gun in this game.
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Probably the best thing I've read or ever [i]WILL[/i] read on these forums. 5 stars.
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so i was going to report this and try and have destiny look at it lol because this is pretty amazing after the first part i relized this was your poem haha amazing job man/or lady
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what the .. we got an artist in here
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The guardian who died in the rain on Venus must have been a low lvl noob since he didn't have Fireborn unlocked.
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I'm liking the poetry. Very good summary of the events that unfold in game.
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I just got got the bounty for thorn couple days ago and I'm stuck on the crucible on 106/500.
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I feel honored rigth now to be a thorny guardian
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holy f... i print it, hang it above the tv and i will look upon it every time i gaze into the horizon of every planet i encounter.
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Why the #satire?
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Dark, you're the best.
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This is why I am still on the Forums! Nice one.
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This rite here is why I stay on the forums
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This is all I heard when I read the title Lol
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Nicely done!
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Very nice! I love the creativity and the thought that went into it.
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Edited by Mommy Hunter: 11/12/2014 1:06:04 AMalso a gaurdian woundnt pull a gun on another (unless he/she is in curcible) so maybe the second game has an evil gaurdian u need to kill
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hmmmm this isnt the speaker it youre gaurdian and if someone knew srry didnt read all comments
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....when i dip, you dip, we dip? Thats what the first thing that popped into my head after reading the title. Your welcome old schoolers!
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Disappointed it wasn't a parody of "I put my hand upon your hip, when I dip you dip we dip"
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Beautiful story! Btw, were you one of the people I helped get thorn? I remember seeing you somewhere?