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originally posted in:The Black Garden
Edited by SaviorsBlood:
6/12/2015 8:34:02 PM
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Shachal - Chapter 20: Warden
Although complete for some time, it took me longer than I wanted to get this one posted. Dismissing its later arrival, here is Chapter 20, and I'm sure some of my regulars could consider it trivial, but I'm glad I've achieved yet another milestone with my Destiny story; every chapter is important, but reaching Chapter 20 means a lot, as will many others parts. I won't disclose specifics, but this chapter marks an important part in my story. I anticipate the telling of it from here forward. Enjoy and thanks for reading. Again, feedback is more than welcome and appreciated.
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1 ReplyThis is the first chapter I've seen, and I'm thoroughly impressed mate.
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13 RepliesTrivial? Not for me it wasn't. I love how you twisted the Super Abilities to work in ways that displays their devastating affect and creative usefulness. Not to mention the build up the Shachal's great escape was executed perfectly. Just the kind of excitement that I needed to combat a slow day.
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11 RepliesThose pesky Hive, thinking that they could stand up to the likes of Sachal, what insects. Very entertaining chapter, Tharsos no doubt got to stretch his muscles this time around with his Fist of Havoc and Ward shield protecting himself, and others, from the hordes of Hive and that Paladin. Then there was Selana's moment to shine when she used her Nova Bomb, quite exciting. Poor Petros, having all that pressure put on him...oh, well. Hope Kenaeth and Lukos had enough fun for one evening, shooting stuff and all.
