originally posted in:The Black Garden
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Sorry about the abysmally long wait guys, but here is the twenty seventh piece of Nora Sinclair's story. Comments would be appreciated especially if they are making a note of link failure.
[url=http://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/62061583/0/0]This link should lead to the other parts.[/url]
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I would read them all, but I don't really have the time...I'm trying to get ready for Nanowrimo, if you know what that is.
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Seems Nora is more mysterious than we originally were lead to believe. Just who is Nora Artemis Sinclair and what things does she keep secrete, whether it's on purpose or on accident? Only time will tell and maybe the truth will reveal itself in the coming chapters. Another fruitful chapter packed with questions.
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There we go! I read the first few, and thought they were great. I did catch a few grammatical errors, but honestly, you work made those little errors seem like nothing. Great job :)
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Yay! A new story, I would love to read it. Joined a few days ago (thanks to SaviorsBlood) and am loving this community writing thingy so far. Will be reading all these pieces.
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Edited by SaviorsBlood: 10/19/2014 6:51:12 PMWell, things heated up rather quickly with that chapter. Excellent chapter, in fact. From the mystery established early on to the combat at the end, I enjoyed this one.