originally posted in:The Black Garden
Again, sorry for the delay. Usually I get a chapter out once a week, but lately it's been over two weeks at a time. I finally got this one out though. Enjoy chapter 14. Feedback is appreciated.
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[b]Announcement: Chapter 14 is revised.[/b]
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Nice; we're getting some more development between Selena and Tharsos, though Lukos's loner attitude isn't going to be helpful and then there's that little vote of confidence at the end for Tharsos. I really want to see how the team works going forward.
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Great chapter, excellent depth in conversations between characters. Fascinating ending (won't say to avoid spoilers), I wonder where this will lead Sachal down the road. I have confidence Tharsos' thoughts about the one particular member will prove to be surprising to all.