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originally posted in:The Black Garden
Edited by SaviorsBlood:
6/12/2015 8:35:50 PM
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Shachal - Chapter 29: Machine
I gotta tell you guys, this story is getting exciting to write. I know I already know what happens and all, but actually writing the ascension to the climax is getting really fun. Not to say I wasn't having fun with other chapters either, but I'm rather enjoying this. I really do hope you enjoy the read, but we will see what you guys have to say after reading this one. I can safely say it's ranked high in my favorite chapters so far. Thank you for giving this a look and I appreciate the feedback as always.
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8 RepliesI've really been slacking. You're at 29 and if everything I had currently was spotless, I'd have maybe 11-12 chapters.
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3 RepliesDid I miss something? I thought Kaeneth died
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5 RepliesWell! I didn't see that coming. Excellent chapter. A lot went down this chapter, hard to pick out a particular scene that I didn't like.
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5 RepliesDid NOT see that ending coming... I half expected something cheesy like Selana coming through that portal, but I would've hated that. Another character introduction this late in the story? Whaaaaaaaa... that's awesome! This- this is just such a good story. Once it's finished, I'm definitely going to re-read all of it.
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7 RepliesNooooo! We finally get to see inside the mind of Sidrous (sorry I can't remember how it's spelled. Too late) and now it looks like we won't see him again?! Very very good chapter. Can't wait for the next one
