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Ladies and gentlemen, I give you the 24th chapter to my Destiny story, Shachal; the installment that has put my story over 100,000 words in length. I know I express my excitement quite often, but for those of you who have followed the story from its inception or its early chapters at least, you might remember my exceptional anticipation of Chapter 13: Leader for its significant plot details. That chapter is the only one that I can compare Chapter 24 to due to the similar level of excitement I felt back then. This isn't only the longest chapter to date, but in my opinion it contains the most important points of interest so far, and is currently my favorite chapter in the told story. Please, enjoy the read. I hope it brings you the same kind of entertainment it brought me writing it. Feedback is more than welcome and appreciated. Oh, and for those fans of Lukos... You'll probably like this chapter quite a bit.
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Great chapter! Full of surprises and suspense.