Here, Bungie, this random fan fiction had more story and purpose than the entire campaign you wrote for us. Don't you really feel like you could have done better? A lot better... I never brought up my issue with the storyline before, since I was assuming a lot of effort was put into online gameplay and there wasn't enough time for a large story, but seeing this very small fan fiction and how great of an insight it is on a possible story, how much work was a good story for you really? I actually hope the writers at Bungie see this and think it over.
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As short as this is, it has the very thing that Destiny lacks: Memorable characters. Characters that the audience can connect to and identify with. It's brief, but it does just enough to get the audience to care about this character. Compared to this, all of Destiny's characters are just soulless automatons. Bungie really ought to see this.