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Edited by Deviot: 12/3/2014 9:45:50 PM
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The Black Engram!!!!!! CROTAS ENGRAM!!! Made by Me & the Community. Feedback needed.

This is Crotas engram! Hi, My name is Garet, Im a college student with about 5 years of animation experience, with a love of destiny and I Just want to share my Creation with you.....THE DREADED CROTAS BLACK ENGRAM. Took around 5 hours to make the base layer of it. This was Made on Cinema 4D. Please read edit 7 for true story, Before commenting on the story. STORY: NEW STORY AT EDIT 7. MUCH MUCH MUCH BETTER~~~REFFER TO EDIT 7 FOR STORY EDIT.~~~ Heres What It looks like if main link doesn't work, just incase: http://imgur.com/wbPPjbx Please tell me what you think? :) Style critics are welcome as well. I love criticism. If You have any other Ideas for me to make Id love to here them too. I write stories from time to time so Please give me your wonderful input, Thank you. Edit 1: I love The Input GamerTag on xbox 360 is --> Elemental 99 If you message me on xbox or see me on xbox just gimme a message and Ill help ya with something. I owe this community so much. Edit 5: If Someone in the bungie company. Even the janitor of the building saw this and commented about it. Id probably break from the added excitement I already have from everyones wonderful happy comments and ideas EDIT 6: BUMP FOR BUNGIE!!!!! WHOA WHAT A BUMPY ROAD!! Edit 7: Story update.***~~~THANK YOU TITANITE THORIAN~~~*** The Black engram drops a clue to a certain exotic item.. Complete a set of specific objectives. Example: THIS IS A CONCEPT. > You killed a Praetorian on Venus and he dropped the black engram. Return the tower and once you are there take the engram to the cryptarch and he will give you a clue. This time, you got some sort of map with strange symbols, Cayde-6 can make sense out of this strange map. Once the map is given to Cayde-6, he will provide you with the location the map was pin-pointing to. Because the engram dropped on Venus, the location Cayde-6 found on the map will be on Venus, due to clues from the black engrams being location specific. Also, Cayde-6 deciphered what the symbols are, turns out this map is a guide to a location of a piece of the Super Good Advice exotic Machine Gun. The location on Venus that cayde found on the map is the Vault of Glass. You must venture into the Vault, once done, Cayde-6 will contact you, notifying you that he deciphered the remaining set of symbols and provide you with instructions that will you to a piece of Super Good Advice hidden within the vault. The objectives this time around is to get a Memory Frame from a Gorgon in order to reveal the location of the exotic weapon piece. After getting the Memory Frame from the Gorgon, a waypoint will appear. It will lead you to the either of the following places: A) The 4th and 5th chests found in the maze. B) Random place between Gorgon's Maze and Atheon's Throne room where a chest containing the exotic piece and spirit bloom is located. Once you find the chest, open it and a piece of Super Good Advice will be yours. Collect 3 more to finish the gun. Sometimes you will get more than one piece, even all of the pieces, and in a very rare chance, the exotic weapon or armor. So you will be needing a couple of Black Engrams in order to collect all exotic pieces, but if extremely lucky, only one engram. NOTE: Weapon pieces must be taken to the Gunsmith so he can re-assemble the weapon. Armor pieces must be taken to Eva Levante so she can also re-assemble the armor, but since the armors need the light of the traveler in order function, armors need to be taken to the Speaker after being re-assembled by Eva Levante in order for him to "charge and cleanse" the exotic armor. Edit 8: The final weapon you get is a cursed exotic. You must purify it to unlock its full potential. The weapon is useable but it isn't its most powerful form till fully cleansed. Edit 9: Wish I could get some bungie feedback.

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  • The engram is great, but the color scheme reminds me of what a tainted exotic might look like. It should pulsate a dark aura to separate it from it's brighter brethren. Orange was said to be the next tier of ultra exotic or whatever they're gonna name it. If it's true. What colors did you originally think off? I think purple, obviously a bad choice since that's legendary. But what if what made it different was the shimmer on it is a dark gloss and the rest of it looks like it's sucking in darkness from all around it. Idk, man, just a fellow artist giving some friendly feedback.

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