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Although complete for some time, it took me longer than I wanted to get this one posted. Dismissing its later arrival, here is Chapter 20, and I'm sure some of my regulars could consider it trivial, but I'm glad I've achieved yet another milestone with my Destiny story; every chapter is important, but reaching Chapter 20 means a lot, as will many others parts. I won't disclose specifics, but this chapter marks an important part in my story. I anticipate the telling of it from here forward. Enjoy and thanks for reading. Again, feedback is more than welcome and appreciated.
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[url=http://www.bungie.net/en/Clan/Post/39972/63746321/0/0]Shachal Collection[/url]
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Trivial? Not for me it wasn't. I love how you twisted the Super Abilities to work in ways that displays their devastating affect and creative usefulness. Not to mention the build up the Shachal's great escape was executed perfectly. Just the kind of excitement that I needed to combat a slow day.