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9/17/2014 3:07:49 AM
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Character self awareness (Or just bland writing.)

When I was playing through Venus and got to the mission where we need to find the Awoken to get to the Garden, my Character (who is Awoken as well) didn't think for a second she might be seeing more of her kind (if there weren't that many on the Tower). Heck, it might even be the same for the other races. What I was thinking, was that maybe they could have fleshed out the character (even if it is just some pawn) more or just gave the characters dialogue unique to their races. Example (From the first Venus mission): Ghost: "Bla bla bla find Awoken bla bla Rift bla bla" Awoken: "You mean more people like me?" Ghost: "Bla bla bla find Awoken bla bla Rift bla bla" Human: "The Blue guys? I've always wondered where they come from." Ghost: "Bla bla bla find Awoken bla bla Rift bla bla" Exo: "More of them? Beep boop, count me in!"

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  • the whole writing seems to know how bad it is... example in the archive(i think) on venus... you get an interesting name, an facility and our ghost is immedialy like: "doctor shim? doesn't matter" ... which seems like most stuff of the story:rasputin is important, then he isn't, then he is again and in the end you kinda forget him. that might just be my guess but it's basicly as if you read the third book of a 5 book-long story. all the new stuff get's intruduced to you and then thrown away as the world seems to know it all already or more will happen later.

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