I've written a poem, much like Baldric's from Black Adder and spoken the same, based on my experience of a lot of gamers. It goes something like this...
"Moan moan moan,
moan moan moan,
moan, moan moan,
moan moan... moan.
Moan, moan, moan,
moan...
...moan."
Any constructive criticisms on my work are implored, but please be kind as I'm a highly sensitive being.
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I'm sorry, I think I've got to get out of here!!
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I thought I'd bump this as it still holds true with a lot of people on this forum. They pay enough for some Bakelite and expect Gold.
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Bump for fun.
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First rate writing. I can feel the amount of heart that went into writing this piece. You've truly connected with your audience. The choice of the palate and word bouquet sufficiently acts as an appetizer for the main course which arrives as an unexpected crescendo of emotion. You have artfully constructed a literary anthem for the common man while retaining an air of sophistication, the likes if which is so uncommon in our current uncultured society. Bravo good sir, bravo!
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I liked the "moan moan moan" part. It felt like you truly captured the essence & complete being of the average mug on this forum. Bravo, sir.
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Writing of the highest quality. The insinuation of displeasure is there, but hidden under layers of whimsical reverie. A triumph.
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Normally I like Emily Dickinson and Walt Whitman but this is topping my list. I feel as though you could depict the occasional quality forum topic a little bit better. Still, very well done If I must say so myself.
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Literature like this is best enjoyed with ice cream.
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Very nice piece of literature. I especially enjoy the part that mentions "Moan".
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Bump!