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Shachal - Chapter 13: Leader
Sorry for the delay, but here is Chapter 13. The biggest chapter yet. Both in length and plot content. Enjoy the read and thank you for the feedback.
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For more on this story, please join and follow [url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Clan/Detail/1047016]Fireteam Shachal[/url]. Thank you for reading!
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13 RepliesTruly, this is your best chapter yet. Sideros' insensitiveness towards Lukos (as a team member) was a surprise. The Fallen Phillistine's attempt to eliminate Sachal was a surprise as well. Also, the information revealed at the end of the first fire team Sachal was a treat. Oh, and before I forget, the fight between Sideros and Tharsos...going to be honest, had a feeling that was coming, but it remains...does he feel responsible for what happend to Tharsos father or does he just want to to prove how tough and strong his will is?
