So i just started on this little gig, hobby you could say writing fantasy stories. I've been doing it for many years, when i was bored or just needed a escape from reality. So now i come with this world, called Suptopias. - Who contains dozens of realms as Gorthina, Surina, Wathril and more. So im just gonna give it a shot really, take it or leave it. Give a cynical comment or some constructive advices of what i could do better beside the grammar errors. Thanks for reading this far though. I will drop the story as a second comment down below. Cheers!