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[url=https://onedrive.live.com/redir?resid=1169903F0BD6A7E6!434&authkey=!AHcTEHWIhcBQM5A&ithint=file%2c.docx]Dashing Businessman[/url]
Part Nineteen of Nora's story. Notifications of link failure and comments are appreciated.
Here's a little excerpt.
[spoiler]As we fought I felt something slowly building within me, something dark, but not like my blood lust, it felt like something… noble. Theodore materialized feet from me, heaving with sweat drenching his suit. I smiled and realized what I it was I had ready to burst within me.[/spoiler]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/7_Nora-Artemis-Sinclair-1-10/en/Groups/Post?id=62061583&groupId=39972#referred-]The other parts[/url]
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I liked the teleporting sword fight. A cool factor to include in a futuristic setting. The effects included with the fight was a nice touch. I'm a little curious as to Nora's and Rexford's relationship.