[b]All right im gonna make this as good as i can, with the best grammar, persuading i got in store, but i bet there will be some mistakes or many of them. [/b]
Im icelandic in blood, and i live in Denmark so i sadly have some pauses where i have to think about the proper word and the accent is maybe a bit thick sometimes.
[b]I'm a newbie [/b]in Gameplays and walktroughs and commentaries, and i've made a commentary. Though before i even want to start on going further, i want someone i dont know to jugde this. [b]Now the camera is bad i know,[/b] but its decent enough and not in 240 ps, i promise.
The video is 19 mins long, so you can skip in it to hear the commentary from random places, if you like. Remember to put it on HD, it helps!
[b]The main thing i just want to know, if i should stop this horrible bull crap or if i should try to invest in hd capture cards and a good mic.
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If you like the way i talk or you dont, please tell me what i do wrong, am i boring, annoying, not funny or the other way around? Could i do better maybe?
It will be much applied to get some [b]crittical and hopefully some constructive thoughts[/b]. Please be noted, that i know the video isnt the greatest, the main thing is i want to know if im any good at the commentary.
Anyways, im all open and i wont get mad or start an depresssion so trolls be aware i have my flame suit on, and the batman suit beneath it.[b] Nice day/night to you all! :)[/b]
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Final bum, juhu! And i'll stop :)
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You need a capture card, that quality is bad. Other than that, your commentary is decent, could use some work.
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bum bum