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Edited by iwritestories:
10/22/2013 9:16:47 PM
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When writing a story...
How should I write actions [i]done[/i] to my protaganist?
Such as when my character is beaten
Should I write it this way...
[quote]A. Daniel was beaten by the prison warden.[/quote]
Or should I write it this way
[quote]B. The warden beat Daniel.[/quote]
Daniel is my protaganist. I want to write my entire story from his perspective. I'm wondering if this small thing makes a difference.
Does it?
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Complete the sequence with one of the two ways you want to write it and then read it. If it doesn't seem to fit right for you, change it and try the other.
