originally posted in:The Black Garden
None of them could here anything. But he could feel their presence. The Cabals. They were close, too close. He and his fellow guardians were forced to flee if the Cabals discovered their research.
”Do you feel something?” Mac, the Titan in their team, asked.
”Yes, i do. The Cabals are close. If you ask me, they are too close for us to safely continue.” Mac became silent. He was trying to hear something.
”Shall we go?” This time, William, the Hunter in their team, asked.
”Yes.”
”But, Zane! We need to find something!”
”No, we need to go!” Zane was the Warlock in the team. He could feel the Cabals presence Mac took a breath and was about to say something, but then he look up behind Zane. Zane saw Mac take his gun out, and ducked right as the bullet missed his head. He looked behind him. The bullet had hit the Cabal’s shield.
”Run!” Mac had already started to fire at the Cabal but it was meaningless, because the bullets only hit the shield. William took out a grenade, rolled it under the shield, and started to run to their ship. Zane heard the explosion and the scream from the Cabal. He looked over his shoulder and saw Mac running faster then he has ever seen him run. Even with his heavy armor, he out-run both Zane and William. They came to the ship and hopped in. It was William’s ship they used, so he was the pilot. Zane looked out of the window and saw the Earth and the Traveler. The mission was dangerous, they did know that. But the research of humans history could be their savor. Save humanity. That is what they do, the Guardians. That is their life. That is their destiny.
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So. I have cut down it a bit now.
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you have my approval.
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Thanks! Good to know ;)
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Okey. I Will cut it down a bit :)
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Oh. I saw that it was a little bit to long. Is that okey or do i need to cut something down?
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To be eligible for the prize, it has to be no more than 300 words. Although, to tell you the truth, if I was judging this, I wouldn't mind including a story that had 301 words. But yes, for this contest, you need to trim it down to 300.
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Okey. I Will cut it down a bit