originally posted in:The Black Garden
My head rang as I awoke from the fall. My ship was pulled down by a group of Cabal's grapple guns. I saw my white helmet lying beside me. I pulled myself together and reconnected my helmet, heading for the doorway into facility I landed at.
Both my sniper rifle and DMR where out of ammo, leaving me with my twelve shot revolver. I started down a hallway filled with empty crates, but then a clang came from the other side. I hid behind a crate and patiently waited. I started to hear footsteps nearing to my very position. A Cabal General walked by me, not even noticing. I came up behind him, and started to unsheathe my knife but the General spun around at the sound slamming me through a wall.
The General threw a crate through the wall making himself a hole to walk through. The General started walking towards me and pulled out a machete. I stepped back a bit and he slammed down his shield. I used half my remaining strength to send a nova bomb crashing into his shield, the shield was neutralized, and he had lost his left arm. He at first was stunned, but then became enraged, and charged at me.
I barely dodged two swings but then he stabbed me in the stomach, watching my life flash before my eyes, I quickly grabbed my revolver and put three rounds through his skull. The machete was pulled out with his falling body, but I was still going to die, I unhatched my helmet and tossed it aside and saw the light blot out as my consciousnesses went away.
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wish you had more of a word count to flesh it out more.
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Edited by Ethsentray: 7/16/2013 7:17:03 PMI feel my short story has been ignored... :(