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6/12/2013 8:10:17 PM
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I wrote a horror story. Criticism?
The story itself is in the pastebin above. It would be appreciated if you could give me any advice.
Please, don't put in your opinion if you did not read it in its entirety.
Danke.
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4 RepliesI'd like to give you advice but I'm something of a writer myself and very pessimistic when critical. Like I do with my own writings, I will probably end up only looking at the negative. Without giving details, a pretty good read.
