JavaScript is required to use Bungie.net

OffTopic

Surf a Flood of random discussion.

Forums

6/12/2013 8:10:17 PM

13

2

Degausser

I wrote a horror story. Criticism?

The story itself is in the pastebin above. It would be appreciated if you could give me any advice. Please, don't put in your opinion if you did not read it in its entirety. Danke.

English

#Offtopic #criticism #writing #scarystories

Comment Reply Start Topic

Report

Posting in language:

Edit

Preview

B I U Quote Link Named Link Spoiler Armory

Post a Poll

Question Post

Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

View Entire Topic

6/13/2013 1:16:12 AM

0

TomSavage [bls]

publish it and i will buy 20 copies

Comment Reply Start Topic

Report

Edit

Preview

B I U Quote Link Named Link Spoiler Armory

Post a Poll

Question Post

Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

I am over the age of #AGE

;