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6/12/2013 8:10:17 PM
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I wrote a horror story. Criticism?
The story itself is in the pastebin above. It would be appreciated if you could give me any advice.
Please, don't put in your opinion if you did not read it in its entirety.
Danke.
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4 RepliesI'd like to give you advice but I'm something of a writer myself and very pessimistic when critical. Like I do with my own writings, I will probably end up only looking at the negative. Without giving details, a pretty good read.
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Very nice and creepy! Do more please! :D
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2 5p00ky 4 m3
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2spooky
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1 ReplyCreepy, it needs to be made into a movie.
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That was awesome. If you write more, please show us!
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3 RepliesBUT THEN WHO WAS FONE?
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publish it and i will buy 20 copies
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1 ReplyEdited by Jive Turkey: 6/13/2013 12:34:58 AMI'll read it brah u seem like a hard working fellow swear on my life if something pops out I will hunt u down
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1 Replytl;dr
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1 ReplyGreat job dude, I really enjoyed it.
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2 RepliesI'm afraid of what Josh wanted to show him.... Good though *thumbs up*
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It's good.
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