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Edited by gwillis3454:
4/27/2013 1:21:21 AM
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Work in progress... Any Suggestions?
I've been working on this piece for a while, still have to get the graphics right but eventually I will finish the side of the spaceship. In case you haven't noticed, I combined two of my favorite pieces of concept art and re-created them. Please tell me what you think I could do to improve this.
- thanks!
Gary Willis
English
#Destiny
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3 RepliesWell now that you have included your image, The idea that you have is very good. I'm a bit confused as to what the line cutting across your piece is. If it's supposed to be the glass of the space ship it does not connect to the actual ship. I think the idea you have is that the camera is looking from inside the cockpit outside into space? If this is the case then the glass should be covering the whole frame and you should attempt to communicate some kind of reflection. See image above. I like the composition a lot! If you develop it I think it will look really good!
