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Edited by Dropship dude:
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Written in Time, a Destiny Prequel Fanfic
The time has come again for new fan-written fiction to hit the site, and what better way to write about a game we know little else about than to write a prequel? Written in Time is my fan-fiction set thousands of years before the events of Bungie's Destiny. Any updates about the story will be edited into the quote box below.
[quote][b]Yes, it's been over a month and there has been nothing from me about the continuation of this story. Well, like all (hopefully) good things, this has taken time, and, well, in all honesty I just haven't had any. Until now. Chapter 3 is now available on Google Docs, simply follow the link below. The first two chapters will no longer be available on Bungie.net as part of this post, as I can only fit two chapters into this space and it seems unfair on the third chapter not to get a feature.[/b][/quote]
[url=https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VTR9SKDIWA49v1I9s7a0gfJXMWAR4cGktqmb7jdAY5U/edit?usp=sharing]Link to the full story on Google Docs.[/url]
I hope you enjoy it, there is more to come. Constructive criticism is encouraged.
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Chapter 3 is now available on Google Docs, simply follow the link in the OP. The first two chapters will no longer be available on Bungie.net as part of this thread, as I can only fit two chapters into one post and it seems unfair on the third chapter not to get a feature.
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I liked it. I'm mildly jealous, if I'm perfectly honest, because my own writing hasn't had this sort of illustrious beauty to it in quite some time, I feel. But yes. Majestic descriptions, good narration and development. There are one or two occasions on which the wording stumbles slightly, but they are about the only faults.
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I liked it! good work.
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Edited by Dropship dude: 3/7/2013 6:57:36 PMChapter two is now finished, introducing some new characters into the fray. Village life remains quiet for now, but soon things are bound to change... As usual I encourage constructive criticism. I cannot make this as high a standard as possible without your feedback.
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sweet. pelp,moarsmroke
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Awesome man! Love it!
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This is a great read, keep 'em coming!
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Thanks for the comments (and likes) everyone, I've written Chapter 2 already but I'm going over it again and again to make sure it's worth posting. Stay tuned :)
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Very well written. It got me wanting to go on an adventure myself. Great work.
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Good stuff. Some of the wording is a bit awry, but the sense of adventure, wonder and awe you command is fantastic.
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This was so beautiful it brought a tear to my eye, really good job on this.
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1 ReplyOne thousand years? Keep in mind that the Destiny takes place in the 2700s.
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Edited by What Up Essay: 3/2/2013 11:56:42 AMEnjoyed. The first fanfics I read were set in the world of Skyrim. It tought me the fine joys of other players conceiving beautiful stories in a common grounded universe. As we learn more about the lore of Destiny, even greater stories will be told, I am sure. ■
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Well written sir, I look forward to more.
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Bump.
