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~music to accompany~
[quote]air raid sirens
drawling out a laconic panoply
of disassociated distress;
it's enough to make a blind man
hunchbacked, where's the threat?
this ain't no game of checkers,
O' winged one, with the man
in the street now guessing, guessing
still guessing, guessing, for an age;
wrap his intuition around a brick
to kick along the ground
amid gas, glass, flames
and condescension, how trite,
how unapplicable- if all is a shadow
could it flicker?- would a long shadow
flicker gold and silver?
amid gas, glass and flames
could all that fell into darkness
be tossed about, perhaps exhumed?
after the sirens[/quote]
I wrote this a while back, it is inspired, in part, by this piece by Dylan Thomas: [url=http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/a-refusal-to-mourn-the-death-by-fire-of-a-child/]A Refusal to Mourn the Death, by Fire, of a Child in London.[/url] One of my favourite poems. Of course my piece has its own meanings and deals with its own concerns, but I really like the imagery surrounding an air raid as a vehicle for darker poetic discussion.
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I hate poems that don't rhyme no offense.