I'm not too fussed about grammatical perfection with this. If I'm writing a piece for my English course, or an original short story, then I'll be a bit more ruthless with my proof-reading. With this, I'm simply telling a story. Anything else can come later. Thanks for the feedback. * Chapter 35 is done; were I to carry on writing within it until I reached the point of Section II's conclusion, then it would end up being silly-long. So I've decided there will be 36 chapters before the conclusion to this part of the tale. 35 will release at some point tomorrow. It's a little shorter than 34 but only just, and could easily have been far longer had I not seen wisdom. ;) You'll hopefully enjoy it, I very much enjoyed writing it perhaps more than any other chapter thus far.