[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Illusive66 I had to log on to post this. I have not been here all that long, and I do not post that often. But, I have been lurking for a long while. YOU MADE ME POST THIS[/quote] You should lurk more and post less. It would be better for all involved. [quote]What the hell is with this? Are you trying to bore me with two dimensional characters, a story which has obviously been made up as it went along and twists so obvious a bat could see them? Your vocabulary is limited and your intelligence is in question.[/quote] 1: The characterisation is good, each character has a distinct personality, and different motivations. 2: Most stories are adjusted as they are written. 3: Bats actually have excellent night vision. 4: The story is well written (very well written as far as fanfiction is concerned) and the authour's use of vocabulary does not appear to be particularly limited.... 5: I don't think you have the right to question anyone's intelligence. [quote]I read this story out of fascination that a story could actually gather a damned fanbase when other fan fics get no readers at all, its just unfair and retarded.[/quote] Aaaaahhhh, I see! You wrote a rubbish fanfic and everyone ignored it, and now you are bitter, got ya... [quote]Also, I can't help but notice how overly human you make the elites, they're not tea-drinking, chocolate eating brits, they are aliens and they should be portrayed as such. [/quote] They are portrayed in the same way they are portrayed in canon. Sangheili society is similar to Human society in many respects. Plus everyone knows real men drink tea. Even if they are aliens. [quote]You've somehow managed to make half of your fanbase -blam!-ly attracted to aliens, you are a furry machine and I seriously think you might be attracted to fricking elites too.[/quote] This would be the classic case of projection, hmm? Well, I'm not going to judge you, others might. [quote]Anyway, had to get that off my chest. [/quote] Your opinion has been noted, filed, and discarded, have a nice day. On a different note: Really enjoying the story Wolver, looking forward to the next part, good job! [Edited on 08.04.2011 6:08 PM PDT]