Not much of a rap guy.
I think it’s great.
Constructive criticism:
Don’t know how else to put it, but it feels like it starts too quickly. Again, if this is like a rap thing and I just don’t get it, then ignore me, but the opening almost feels… too short? Like the music could benefit from being allowed to build itself up before the vocals start.
Though you’ve done a great job. 👏
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[quote]Like the music could benefit from being allowed to build itself up before the vocals start. [/quote] This is true, when I was working on it I just deleted the intro from the original song in favour of the structure I had in mind, and when I tried to add it back it didn't work