Absolutely great but it just kinda reminds me of Re:Zero and just makes me sad. You know the main character watches his friends die but then can see it happen again and again and again until he can finally get it right were they don’t die. But still great story
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Ouch. Sadness was my intent, though, so it seems I’ve done my job. Difference is Subaru got the chance to repeat events until he saved people while Ayane isn’t so lucky. I’m glad you liked it, thanks
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Yeah. I do love how she just goes. “I saw Eva talking to that hotshot god slayer”. Heh not going to lie it made me laugh. Though I’m scared for next year because I wonder if she or if you get a new character will be affected by the new dark subclasses
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[quote]I do love how she just goes. “I saw Eva talking to that hotshot god slayer”.[/quote]Heh [quote]Though I’m scared for next year because I wonder if she or if you get a new character will be affected by the new dark subclasses[/quote]Well, I almost always invent new characters with every story I write. So we may never see Ayane or the bartender again. Or I may decide to recycle characters. That could be pretty interesting. Depending on what happens in Beyond Light I may be inspired to write something on the subject of the Stasis Subclasses. We’ll see.