[spoiler]don't roast me please[/spoiler]
Chapter one first life
[b]A[/b] ghost is flying through an old bray facility when it finds a room hidden under four feet off concrete and steel.
After a few minutes of searching she finds the access panel. Once in side the ghost picks up a potential light bearer. While scanning she sees a jagged piece of metal protruding from behind a large crate.
She barely manages to shift the crate,underneath lay the twisted,rusted form of an EXO. The ghost's shell twirls and spins excitedly. Thank the traveler I finally found my guardian!
She funnels light into the EXO's body
and watches as the crushed frame miraculously becomes whole again.
The EXO slowly blinks awake,[i]where,where am I.[/i] You're on Mars you've been dead for a very long time.
[i]Dead[/i] what do you mean dead? Who,what are you?! I'm a ghost I brought you back. What do you mean brought me back? None of this makes sense!
Okay look,you're a guardian now and I'm your ghost. I've been looking for you for a long time. Why'd you choose to bring me back then,why am I so special? You have a connection with the light,witch is how I found you.
Look we need to get you to the city there's people there who can help. But we'll need a ship first. A ship? The EXO asks. Why well let's just say the city's pretty far away.
Thanks for reading this was completely unscripted so I guess let the hate flow : }pm
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Nice job! I recommend using quotes “” for when a character is talking but other than that you’re not bad at all!