originally posted in:The New Dojo
True. But he's not affiliated with the Dojo. Here's my opinion of him:
[quote](Do you know how incredibly hard it is to write an entire report on an extremely vague magical space asshole? Well do you? Now imagine having to do that yourself with almost no information whatsoever. It took me practically a day to write this up. I need to speak to someone about this)- J.P.[/quote]
[quote]extremly vague magical space asshole[/quote]
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You made him. None of these excuses are anything above flimsy and overall disappointing. Just quit while you're ahead, and learn not to godmod. Who knows, people might start actually liking you and your characters, then.
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But, he's literally a plot-only oriented character. [spoiler]I need him. I'll even delete his -blam!-ing bio if I have to. You know what, I will.[/spoiler]
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A plot orientated character is no excuse for the levels of OP you reach. Just tone it down, and just attempt a normal level of character. If you do, it would be much better.
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[spoiler]I just deleted his bio. No longer a character. Just a "villain" for now. Let me be edgy for my winter plot, then I'll tone everything down a shit-ton. Ok?[/spoiler]
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It's not the edginess. It's the level of OP you've taken. It's as stupid as Wehb's.
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I [i]earned[/i] my OPness, thank you very much.
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>wants to say that I earned my OPness. >in truth, Irina just got more overpowered as time went by. >rip.
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And the others just started as overpowered...
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Basically. Other than Lu, I guess.
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bad Orn bad
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LOOK HOW UNDERPOWERED THIS UNFINISHED BIO IS https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/229659295/0/0/1 well, aside from that power sword copy.
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Still terrible, and nothing but an inflation of ego.
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Ah, yes, bias.
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Hehe.
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Heh, OPness. Oh-Penis. Heh.
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Yeah. That's a result of putting zero weaknesses down, right? Because he can be beaten in normal form relatively easily. But if he's in normal form, he usually has an army at his back...
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And there's the broken part. You have to give him an army to back him up. That's just awful.
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Oh. That's a shame. That army is a necessity for my plot. [spoiler]But he does have individual encounters in general, at least he used to. The whole army thing is basically temporary plot-armor until his main plot kicks off. While it may appear edgy and extremely OP, it'll be used to create quite an epic string of posts. I've been planning this for a long... long time.[/spoiler]
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This all continues to seem rather bs.
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Think what you will. If you think it's bullshit, then I have succeeded.
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You're not meant to be making BS shit. You're meant to be making plot that is fun but challenging. You just need to stop and realise you're nothing but a laughing stock with how OP you act.
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Wait. You don't even know what my plot is...
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I know enough.