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Edited by UWantARefund: 7/29/2017 3:41:17 AM
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Help me reach 1000 Subscribers! :D

Okay gimme a sec here, I'm not even close to that goal. Or at least not yet. I'm hoping to spread my content and the stuff that I work hard to make. Thank you all in advance!

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  • Edited by Halcyoniix: 7/29/2017 7:33:12 AM
    Here's the thing with montages: Almost 90% of all the montages I see on here are just barely (sometimes not even) edited clips stringed together with no rhyme or reason; usually accompanied by a stereotypical dubstep song that almost everyone uses. As for this, it really isn't anything special. Most of the clips are just novabomb single or double kills with an occasional easy kill with a pulse or fusion rifle. Editing can be much better; cut out the unnecessary filler in between and add a smooth transition to give it some flow. The song choice is pretty nice, but nothing on screen really complimented texture changes in the song. For example at 2:17, the song's ambience is near it's lowest, so why is there still a gunfight going on? You could've gone into a private match, recorded some cinematics, slap a letterbox and color correction on it and it would be fine. Text transitions could use some work as well. The "Break The Universe" text at the beginning just kind of disappears. It looks a bit unpolished. To be fair, at least you kept some kind of game audio in there so that I'm not just listening to a song. Definitely not the worst montage I've seen, but there's stuff to work on. A few clips were actually pretty nice like that quad novabomb at the start. It's not up to me whether or not you accept this criticism, but either way I hope you achieve whatever it is you desire. Good luck. o7

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