originally posted in:Destiny Fiction Producers
So, I've put out a few of these episodes, that I figured it was time to get a table of contents out.
Episode I: Shin's Find (https://www.bungie.net/en/Clan/Post/1371758/223000373/0/0)
Episode II: Friends are Found and Rivals are Made (https://www.bungie.net/en/Clan/Post/1371758/223000597/0/0)
Episode III: Pari's Find (https://www.bungie.net/en/Clan/Post/1371758/223001612/0/0)
Episode IV: Hunting Day (https://www.bungie.net/en/Clan/Post/1371758/223383748/0/0)
Episode V: Return of the Deserter (https://www.bungie.net/en/Clan/Post/1371758/225252019/0/0)
Episode VI: The Duel (https://www.bungie.net/en/Clan/Post/1371758/225359172/0/0)
Episode VII: An Argument, A Story, and An Apology (https://www.bungie.net/en/Clan/Post/1371758/225544056/0/0)
Episode VIII: A Guardian is Born (https://www.bungie.net/en/Clan/Post/1371758/225644798/0/0)
Episode IX: Fight a Guardian with a New Gun (https://www.bungie.net/en/Clan/Post/1371758/226599907/0/0)
Episode X: The Hunt (https://www.bungie.net/en/Clan/Post/1371758/227309304/0/0)
Episode XI: Kabr and his Legion (https://www.bungie.net/en/Clan/Post/1371758/227600847/0/0)
Episode XII: Lost (https://www.bungie.net/en/Clan/Post/1371758/228262264/0/0)
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You've got a pretty decent legend here. Pari is a good strong character with some twists in her tale. I liked how you started tying into Paradox. The ending was a complete surprise to me. Overall, you're writing is pretty good. Bump!
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Yo, when are we going to work on the Ahamkara story line with Dredgen?
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Bump!