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Edited by TheSuMan:
2/25/2017 2:42:26 AM
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Into the Hellmouth: A Destiny Story
Hello, everybody! Some of you may know me, some of you may not. Almost a year ago, I began writing a Destiny Fanfiction, Into the Hellmouth. It's a chronicle of the failed raid on Crota's end that Eris embarked upon with her companions. 105,000 words later, here is the completed version! I've striven to keep it as lore-accurate as possible, but needless to say, a good amount of it is speculation. However, if you like, go on and give it a read! I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I did writing it!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rdHOZSV61CYLjCQr6v_j6ygP-6AinEmE77sWtou3DHw/edit?usp=sharing
Also, if there are any Bungie employees reading this, I'd love to find a way to make this cannon. :D
Edit: Thanks for all the love on this post, guys! Really glad to see that you enjoyed it!
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1 ReplyPhenomenal. Absolutely phenomenal.
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1 ReplyI see what you meant by re doing some parts. It's really good.
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1 ReplyI remember this story, I loved it
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4 RepliesHey maybe you could do a story about the 3rd wielder of the Exotic Weapon The Last Word but you should read the story behind the weapon first.
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2 RepliesBungie should make it canon to the destiny universe
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1 ReplyOut of curiosity, have you thought about eventually building an archive post, one that holds a link to all of your stories' tables of content?
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1 ReplyBump dude this was fantastic, really enjoyable read, cant wait for the next one !!!
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1 ReplyThat was incredible
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1 ReplyI enjoyed it, I liked the subtle hints of the character we play as. The naming of an exotic weapon with thunderlord. I wish bungie would put out some official novels, incorporate more lore in game, etc. The story is there, they just need to tell it properly. Hopefully they approach you with some of it.
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1 ReplyI've been trying to chip away at this story for a week now lol. It's hard trying to find the time between all of my courses, but it's definitely got me hooked! Great job on this!
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1 ReplySully this story was amazing... it inspired me to start a destiny themed story. Just wondering if I could run the prologue by you?
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2 RepliesShould talk to bungie and see about a published book. They did Halo books perhaps they'd do destiny books. You made a great read, worth a shot to try and get it published.
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1 ReplyFantastic read, simply fantastic!!
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1 ReplyEdited by Bananagram21: 2/24/2017 5:41:53 AMIt took my three hours to read this... I have never spent three hours of my life in a better way. The way you included in game dialogue seamlessly into the story! Oh my goodness that's impressive! And when I read, I wasn't just looking at emotions on a page, I was feeling them. The rage, anger, curiosity, depression, madness. Amazing! That's so good! I'm sorry I'm fanpersoning out a bit, but holy Jesus that was good! Quick edit, can you link me to the other story you worked in with smartaurum I think you had said it was?
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1 ReplySorry it took me a little while to get back to you. I was studying for my PHYS final. I like the changes that you made. Your work flows in a smoother tone. The server room dialogue is great! The flow from Sai and Eris, and the person talking is well done too! Good job, I look forward to reading more of your work if you decide to make more!🙌
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1 ReplyLoved reading it. Hope you don't mind if I share it with my friends :)
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1 ReplyOne of the best fan fics I've read. The way you tie in lore with the story makes it read smoothly and kept me interested the entire time. I actually just started reading it for the third time. Thank you for your hard work, as it is truly inspiring 👍🏽.
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1 ReplyThis is great stuff, really enjoyed reading this. Gives a whole new outlook on the moon and the crota raid and Destiny itself, keep it up.
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Into the Hellmouth: A foot up your ass story. Staring me. Red Formnan.
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Edited by Blaziken10: 2/23/2017 6:02:04 PMThis is my fan made raid the unstable core . It is not completed yet. https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/218860349/0/0
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3 RepliesOh my what a good read that was, I must say from how you imagined the Crotas end mechanic to how you re imagined the story of the husk of the pit I must say everything in this book apart from a few spelling mistakes is absolutely flawless and would definitely be on my read again list, Good job! P.s. Did anyone else think that toland spoke with count Dokus accent ?
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2 RepliesHey sully did you check out my raid post?
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1 ReplyReally great read!
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4 RepliesGood read bud! Quite enjoyed it.
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2 RepliesParticularly inspiring; fills me with the urge to create a story too. Might do that.
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3 RepliesIt won't open on my S7. Will it only work on a computer?
