[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forums/Post/218865073]Exotic Armor Grimoire Cards Master Post[/url]
[spoiler]She had told him that his Light would one day shatter and die.
Not on that day, at least, but soon. So there was hope.
He could reach tomorrow with that hope.
He also realized that she was right. Even he knew that he was not immortal.
His Ghost had probably started retreating back to warn everyone of the horrors that lurk here, assuming that Rezyl was lost to the Hive.
The black cloud that had been suffocating him was beginning to dissipate.
He could see that the corridor was now lit. Not brightly, no, but enough. Enough to see the witch. Enough to see the writhing mass of bodies that now surrounded him.
He leapt at them from a crouch, as to catch them off guard, Arc Light crackling in his clenched fists and down his arms.
And as he hit the ground, he felt only two things.
He felt his Light, shining brighter than it ever had before.
And he felt that same Light consuming him.[/spoiler]
This one is more of a continuation of the Rezyl Azzir: Legends and Mysteries card.
As always, any feedback is appreciated!
Edit: May or may not redo this one...
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Bunp for later please! I have to read this.
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That was pretty good, but I'm interested in seeing what you change if you do a re-write. Don't get rid of this, though! It's still really good. Maybe keep them both?
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Full rewrite please. This is my favorite exotic of the entire game ever. Almost all of the lore is tied up in hive crap. I started reading and saw hive and cringed. Helmet seems more Vexy if you think about it, not hivey.
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I like it. Keep them coming.
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That's pretty good