originally posted in:The Digital Dojo
[quote][spoiler]Alright, as promised I'll be helping you out
The stopping me in midair? How long does it last? Is it temporary or until you put me down? Because that's definitely pretty broken [/spoiler]
[b]The Tiger attempts to move though the Arthur is unsure [/b][/quote]
[spoiler]Sorry, I am basing this of a character in a book I am writing. It is caused by a device that can, to an extent, manipulate matter at its will. It takes a lot of energy, though, so it doesn't last long.[/spoiler]
[b]Titanus throws the tiger towards his blade and slices at him.[/b]
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[spoiler]you're writing a book?[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]Yes, but I am not very far into it yet.[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]huh, what's it about?[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]An alien race sneaks onto Earth, disguises themselves as humans, and takes the place of every political leader in the world. Then, another alien race which is fighting the aforementioned one tells a man about what is going on, named David. So David has to kill all the worlds 'leaders'. There is a lot more to the plot, but I don't want to give too much away.[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]Sounds cool.[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]Thanks, hopefully I finish it soon.[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]Got it [/spoiler] [b]The Tiger, reaches towards his sword, drawing it and blocking the attack as best he could [/b]
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[spoiler]Sorry if my guy seems a bit op, I am hoping to fix all the bugs soon.[/spoiler] [b]The two swords meet, and Titanus's sword melts the feeble metal. He then round-house kicks the tiger into a wall.[/b] "I do not have time to waste effort on suck feeble Heros, where is the master of this dojo? I challenge you to a dual!"
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[spoiler]Melting my blade, big no no frankly. [/spoiler] [b]The Tiger stumbles to his feet and laughs again [/b]
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[spoiler]Darn it, thanks.[/spoiler] [b]Titanus looks around, waiting for another opponent.[/b] "Since you are the only one here, I might as well just kill you." [b]Titanus fires a huge volley of energy from his gun and flies towards the tiger.[/b]
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[b]The Tiger pounces to the side, avoiding the volley. He reaches for a strap on his leg and throws a dagger towards you [/b]
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[spoiler]I think my character is a bit too OP, sorry about that.[/spoiler] [b]Titanus, still flying, barrel rolls around the dagger and fires another volley of energy.[/b]
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[spoiler]Hey, at least you own it. A lot of guys come by and try to deny how powerful their character is.[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]Yeah, I always hate that. This is just a test run, trying to see how some of my other characters would fit in here. So far, I doubt I can use any of my characters I made because they are all even better than Titanus.[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]Nah its fine. You live and you learn [/spoiler] [b]The Tiger pounces to the side again, his feline speed kicking in [/b]
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[b]Titanus fires a heat seeking missile towards the tiger, grabs a large chunk from the remains of a turret, and throws the wreckage at the Tiger.[/b]
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[b]A second turret pops up, destroying the missile [/b] "We have defenses!" [b]He turns into a full Tiger, sprinting to the side on alp fours [/b]
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[b]Titanus fires a volley of energy towards the turret.[/b] "How many turrets can this place hold? Also, did you just turn into a tiger? Well, I guess this isn't the weirdest thing that has happened today." [b]Titanus then focuses his attention back to the tiger, and slams to the floor, trying to crush the tiger, swinging his shield at it.[/b]
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[b]He flies backwards, his bones cracking at the hit
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[spoiler]He as in your Tiger?[/spoiler] [b]A light on Titanus's wrist pops up.[/b] "Dang it! Why do I always get calls at the worst times!" [b]Titanus takes a step back from the Tiger and holds his finger up, indicating to give him a second.[/b] "Hello? Oh. I see. That is very... Interesting news." [b]Titanus looks towards the tiger.[/b] "Well, it seems that I am in the wrong place. I am supposed to be at another dojo on some other planet. Sorry for the misunderstanding, take this as an apology gift." [b]Titanus takes out a futuristic pistol and lays it on the ground, then takes off.[/b] [spoiler]Don't worry, I am not leaving the dojo. Just coming back with a slightly less OP character.[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]Oh yeah no worries man. I encourage you to return! You did well for your first attempt though you definitely could use some tweaking [/spoiler]
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[spoiler]I am coming back with a much weaker guy next time.[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]When I started out here, I had one character and nothing but the sword on my back. Try something like that. When comfortable using that, try out some powers [/spoiler]
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[spoiler]Just did, except instead of a sword it is a gun. Hopefully this one doesn't crash and burn.[/spoiler]