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originally posted in:The Digital Dojo
Edited by Hal0T1nman:
7/16/2016 12:02:08 PM
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[spoiler]Please note: this is a second character, Korsis.[/spoiler]
[b]A hooded figure approaches the gates and removes something from his belt. A red blade emits from it. He extends his hand and the gates begin to shake.[/b]
[spoiler]open[/spoiler]
EDIT: THIS IS NO LONGER ACTIVE
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[b]i walk outside[/b] Who you?
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[b]A shadowy figure leaps over the gate and trucks you, sending you flying[/b] [u]You done F*cked up.....[/u]
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[spoiler]aw man, not this guy[/spoiler] [b]He gets up, brushes himself off, and teleports back to his ship.[/b] [b][i][u]NOPE[/u][/i][/b]
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[b]A portal opens up on your ship, and the figure steps out[/b] [u]You killed one of our members, now take your beating[/u]
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[spoiler]I did not kill them, only severely injured them in the shoulder. [/spoiler] No, I didn't. Who are you talking about? [spoiler]Seperate storylines. You wanna do this, do it on that storyline.[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]Yeah no, that's not how things work[/spoiler] [u]You killed her, now you will pay[/u] [b]He Leaps past you, slicing you with shadow claws[/b]
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[spoiler]ya sure?[/spoiler] *I dodge them and set the ship to autopilot. It's headed for the Sun of the system that were in.* You wanna die? Now get yourself... Off my ship.
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[b]He opens up a portal back to the dojo, and grabs you by the throat, throwing you in. He jumps in afterwards[/b]
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[spoiler]Godamit.[/spoiler] Listen man, what do you want? I'm sorry about you friend, but you've got the wrong guy. I know I can't beat you, but I can do this. *extends hand*
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[b]He dashes past you faster then you can blink, raking your eyes[/b] [u]You ain't getting out of this one[/u]
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[spoiler]Im already blind, *inappropriate cuss word*[/spoiler] Augh... [b]he ignites his lightsabers, and gets into a defensive position. [spoiler]Just whoop me already...[/spoiler][/b]
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[b]He continues to dash past you, punching and kicking you[/b]
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[b]He falls to the ground, exhausted and covered in scratch marks.[/b] *heavy breathing* *breathing intensifies* What *cough* Are you? *cough* [spoiler]Finally... [/spoiler]
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[b]He leans down, grabbing you by the throat[/b] [u]Your worst nightmare[/u] [b]He slams your head into the ground, opening a portal[/b] [u]Don't make me come back[/u] [b]He steps though, the portal closing behind him[/b]
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[spoiler]Jesus... I'll be back...[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]If I can advise something.... People CAN be overpowered here. Most choose not too. Since you have the force, it immediately made you a near God mod(Someone who can basically just render someone useless). You did great by taking hits. But I saw you character Jack, talk about "different storylines?"(we don't use those.) you can fix this problem by making a balanced character that is fun to fight. I guarantee you, that if you have a fun fight/character it's a 100% chance of getting in flawlessly. So I encourage you to come back and try again![/spoiler]
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[b]A figure approaches him [/b] "I'd stop that if I were you."
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I've heard of you. Nora, the one who nearly killed the Arbiter, who can survive a bullet to the chest. I wish not to fight you. [b]The gate continues to rumble, and it starts to crack.[/b]
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[b]The gates immediately repair themselves [/b] "Not that easy."
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Excuse me? [b]His hand form a circle, and he points them at the gates. He releases a blast of Force energy towards the door, and it explodes. He ignites his dual lightsabers and walks towards the entrance.[/b] Too easy.
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"OI! Where the hell do you think your going?!" [b]You fall to your knees a tremendous pain in your body [/b]
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Argh... What the... Augh... [b]He tries to stand up but is unable to.[/b] [spoiler]gettin tired of these op moves[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]This isn't Nora Mwuhahaha [/spoiler] [b]The figure goes around you and is a young looking man with Hazel brown hair and Emerald eyes [/b] "I said it wasn't easy,"
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[spoiler]*garbled noises* ah! I found it. *gunshot*[/spoiler] Augh... Fine. [b]He puts his hands on the ground and it begins to shake. The piece of earth he's standing on raises into the air.[/b] Who are you? I'm here on a bounty, a person named Shadow, Sith Lord, extremely powerful. You seen her?
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[spoiler].. I don't get it [/spoiler] "Shadow hasn't been around in a while,"
