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This is the intro to the story A Lost Cause. Please let me know how you all like it.
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I shuffled forward, rough cloth shielding me from the sand and wind, my boots pushing aside the red sand of Mars.
The metal safe house where I had camped out for the past few days was just ahead, well hidden amidst the sand and rock.
[i]You could just teleport there, you know.[/i]
I silently shake my head, dislodging some sand from my goggles. "Not now, me." I say out loud, my voice muffled against the sand-proof hood that shields my face.
I finally reach my destination, quickly tapping in the code to activate the doors with gloved fingers. They whir open, sand ghosting down.
The old lights flicker on as I enter, and I remove my sweat stained goggles. I collapse into a metal chair.
"Rest. I love it." I say to myself, pulling off my hood.
My house is a simple place. The room where I now sit is nothing more than a couple of boxes of rusted tools, and this chair.
My room is seperated from this one by another door, and that contains a bed, a desk with paper and pen, and a nearly broken dresser drawer.
I also have a kitchen, if one can count a sink and a rough firepit as a kitchen. Adjacent to the kitchen is-
A loud clang echoes from my room.
I throw off my cloak and approach the door, right hand slipping over a metal knife; I used to have an Arc one, but that's gone now.
I glide over the floor, my steps barely making any sound. I tug the knife from my waistband.
A loud grunt emits from within, and a scowl etches itself across my face.
A Cabal. Fourth one this month.
I peek in, to see the legionaire poking around my personal belongings; the beast is facing away from me.
I creep up on the intruder, unable to stop that old grin playing across my face.
"That bra is not going to fit on you, motherfuсker." I whisper as I slit the legionaire's throat, and blood leaks from its neck. The thing's death is silent.
The dragging of the body isn't.
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Glad to see some more of ur work