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Edited by Snarkii: 2/22/2016 8:09:36 PM
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Hello fellow readers! It's come to my attention that I [i]might[/i] be "pulling a Bungie" with my writing. "What is pulling a Bungie?" you ask? Aha, well. Some of my readers miss the [i]old times[/i] of my writing, you know, before I made changes trying to [i]enhance[/i] it, when I [i]probably[/i] made it a [i]wee[/i] bit not-so-good, ehe. I've lost some readers over many things, and I plan to [i]fix[/i] those many things before I lose any more in the long run. Rest assured I plan to change all that and give you guys the enjoyment you guys had when reading my stories before. [spoiler]That's why this post [i]is[/i] here, heh.[/spoiler] Before I continue I'd like to answer a couple of questions, though. [quote]Question: Snark, why did you change the writing style?[/quote] An excellent question! I thought it was in my (and others) that I added a bit more detail to my work. The feedback for the writing style change was overall positive, soooo it stuck, ehe. [quote]Question: Why so many Intermissions?[/quote] I'd have to say this part is my fault. My first Intermission about Rush, Hunter (and the Titan and Warlock with the bubble mishap) was when I [i]finally[/i] was able to fix my game console's charger, I decided to entertain ya'll a bit. Sure, I ended that Intermission speedy quick Then I got carried away afterwards. With the whole Markus and Cosm0 Intermission... I'm sure you guys are aware of my newer Create-a-Guardian, right? The whole purpose of [i]that[/i] one's creation was because I felt [i]extremely[/i] bad that I couldn't finish the others on the old one (people definitely brought this issue to my attention), and the fact that it was extremely cluttered made it worse, blegh. [quote]Question: Snark, why has it been so long since you've posted a Take?[/quote] This one upsets me as well. I used to be able to post Take at an extremely fast pace, but lately I haven't because Snark has new responsibilities that require more of my attention. But hopefully I can get back into the groove with this soon. [quote]Question: Why do you want feedback/criticism?[/quote] I enjoy criticism to the highest degree, it'll only help me get better with my writing and stay focused on the task at hand with it. If you liked something I used to do, please, say so! My only purpose is to entertain my lovely readers! If you have any ideas on how I can make anything better, again, please say so! Do not hesitate to say anything, I'm here to listen to you guys!

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  • Keep doing what you are doing. These are fun to read, and have a pretty interesting plot to them. I see no reason to change what is not broken

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