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originally posted in:The Digital Dojo
1/14/2016 12:37:07 AM
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[b]Darth Tornyus sits in his bed......cold, confused[/b]
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[b]You hear a knock on the door.[/b] [i]"Knock knock."[/i]
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[b]come in[/b]
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[b]A small skeleton man opens the door.[/b] [i]"That was a joke, but hey. You seem pretty tense."[/i]
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[b]its just.... I can't talk about it[/b]
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[i]"Well alright then."[/i] [b]He goes to leave [/b]
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[b]*i give in, I spill everything, me having visions of being a Jedi and my mom......[i]dying[/i][/b]
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[i]"Well. That's pretty deep man. So, you think it's true?"[/i]
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[b]Man I [i]really[/i] don't know[/b]
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[spoiler]Sorry, quick question. Why are you using bold letters for the dialogue? You can juts do normal letters for that. And use bold for the actions.[/spoiler] [spoiler]And you aren't giving me much to go on.[/spoiler] [i]"Well. When was the last time you saw her?"[/i]
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Edited by Spike Spiegel: 1/14/2016 1:14:19 AM[spoiler]ok thanks for the tip[/spoiler] [spoiler]sorry I can fix that[/spoiler] "My Mom........ She's been sick, like [i]really[/i] sick. I joined the Dark side in hopes that I could save her but... She still hasn't gotten better. That's why I came here..... To [i]train[/i] but I don't think that she'll make it."
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[i]"Well. Maybe....look on the bright side."[/i] [b]While it seems like he's using an ordinary phrase. He seems to be hinting at something else.[/b]
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Edited by Spike Spiegel: 1/14/2016 1:19:36 AM[i]"well [b]chuckles[/b] I guess coming to the Dojo has been exciting.*[/i]
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[spoiler]Pro tip: Example: I like to eat fried beans. [b]Eats fried beans.[/b] [i]Italics sometimes makes your character have a certain tone to them. But not necessary at all.[/i][/spoiler] [spoiler]Make sense?[/spoiler] [i]"Ya."[/i]
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[spoiler]ok got you[/spoiler] [i]"hey sit down, wanna drink?[/i]
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[i]"Nah man. Would go right through me."[/i]
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[i]"Suit yourself"[/i] [b]forces a glass of blue milk[/b]
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[spoiler]*cough*[/spoiler] [spoiler]So...I know your new to this but uhhh...this is going no where..,,[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]im getting to it dang son[/spoiler] [i]You know... If these dreams are real... Would you like to help me become a Jedi?[/i] [b]finishes the milk[/b]
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[i]"If I knew what that meant. Sure."[/i] [spoiler]now that I think about it.[/spoiler] [spoiler]I have no characters suitable for this [/spoiler]
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Edited by Spike Spiegel: 1/14/2016 2:58:52 AM[spoiler]make one boy, make a Jedi or something[/spoiler] "You don't know what a Jedi is?" [spoiler]you are given the option to listen yes or no[/spoiler]
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[b]The fierce deity walks in.[/b] Alright Mr.Sith lets go. [b]He grabs you be your head and walks you outside[/b] Make a plot. Right now. Your odd small talk is pissing me off. [spoiler]Fourth wall...SHATTERED.[/spoiler]
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[i]"Ok Clown kid"[/i] [i]"We have to travel to the Jedi Temple. Assuming it's not destroyed, then I must come in contact with Yoda.... One of the best force users"[/i] [b]*Forces Deity to the wall and grabs him by the head*[/b]
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[b]He bitch slaps you. And is released from your force.[/b] Great. Let's go "physics".
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[i]"Hope you don't mind flying"[/i] [b]we board my ship, a Cargo type[/b] [spoiler]co-pilot ship with rooms, a kitchen, and a holographic chess table[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]Ayyyy[/spoiler] Wow. Was it really that hard to stick with marble? Hey. Whatever floats your boat I guess. [b]He looks around[/b] No leather seats?
