"Wherever I walk, blood and bodies follow in my wake. Wherever I speak, my lungs burn people at the stake. They're drawn to me, like moths to a flame. It makes me crazy, it drives me insane."
What do you think?
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If it rhythms, it must be deep.
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Those some evil lungs
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I'm guessing you're over everyone calling you lettuce.
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Edited by Herakles: 12/30/2015 6:55:10 PMPride?
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Vampire with halitosis?
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Edited by ArieztheDragon: 12/30/2015 4:09:09 AMIt sounds like a sexy prostitute with aids. A peice of poisoned cheesecake in a fat neighborhood.
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I've written a better poem and its a haiku. Ohh, I like it when You say it slow and sexy Restraining orderrrrrrrr
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Religion? Fear?
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Represents money.
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Edited by Taco: 12/30/2015 4:19:00 AMI think you misspelled crazy. It's KrayZ
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Are these lyrics to a circa-2006 screamo song?
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Edited by SigilG362: 12/30/2015 4:11:07 AMYou ask me, it sounds like the Inquisition.
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Edited by Dreamicide: 12/30/2015 4:13:50 AMThat sounds like a great intro to my YouTube channel! [spoiler]I'm bad at poetry [/spoiler]
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Something that's actually kind of stupid.
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Same.
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I think it's spendid, well written and much passion given. It gives you the feel of the writer. I like to write poems too but mine probably won't make sense to you. And my poetry doesn't rhyme.
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like moths to flame is a band...lyrics of some kind?
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Edited by Thoth: 12/30/2015 4:01:56 AMI feel like I've heard this somewhere before. It sounds pretty badass.
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Edited by Masque of Night: 12/30/2015 4:01:36 AMSomeone who causes harm to others, perhaps through their actions, but mostly through their words. This behavior draws more attention towards them, even though the crowded feeling drives them mad. There's no context to go off, so this is just one interpretation. A shot in the dark is better than nothing, I suppose.
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Emoest shit I've ever read [spoiler]still good though[/spoiler]
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Is this a riddle? Or more of a poem
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Did you write this yourself?
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What's the context.