originally posted in:The Roleplay League
Hey guys! Check out my new Story about a Gaurdians awakening. Tell me how I did in the comments and also tell me what it needs. Bye.
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I will admit, it is pretty bad. There is no character development or interaction at all other than the dialogue in the game, We literally know nothing about his character other than the fact that he is a warlock, and he has the ability to wake up and run.
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Please don't bump this cancer.
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It was for keks.
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Nobody read it. It's shit
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That's unnecessarily mean.
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It's true though.
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[quote]That's unnecessarily mean.[/quote]
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Ur mad.
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What she said.