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Edited by Legend To None:
11/13/2015 9:51:57 AM
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Feedback on Analyzation Paper
It is a paper analyzing "I Have a Dream". It is only 3 pages long. Just read it and let me know what you think. Does it make sense and is the citing correct? Have fun and thank you.
This paper is looking for the use of poetic literary terms within the speech. I will not be discussing discrimination and such. No worries.
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2 RepliesIt's bad
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2 RepliesUse a grammar checking website.
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2 RepliesI found the paper really good for falling asleep
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3 RepliesI didn't read into depth, but you seem to repeat words and phrases. The prime example would be "this speech". Try to limit that phrase to about 2 times a paragraph. Not a bad start though!
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Edited by NumericChaff : 11/13/2015 10:51:44 AMTfw help never arrived.
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