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[Novel] True Sangheili (Part 39 available!) ~ 18 December

SCHOLAR, SOLDIER, HERETIC... SAVIOUR. At first, the life of a warrior in the Covenant army seems a noble one. But are the motives behind the war with the humans as innocent as the Sangheili, Sorran, believes? An act of heresy unveils a conspiracy spanning thousands of years, which could bring about the total ruin of the Covenant. [i] True Sangheili[/i], from the fan fiction author of [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=31052475]Halo 3: Insurrection[/url] and [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=27927918]Memoirs of an ODST[/url]. [u] ==[b]CHAPTER LISTING[/b]==[/u] [b]Book I[/b] ([url=http://docs.google.com/fileview?id=0B4iUh3dauqsjN2QzMjBjYzQtZGE2Ny00ZDUzLThlZTQtNDIwMDJjYTBjNTk3&hl=en]PDF[/url]) [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356#35203356]Prologue + Chapter list[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356#35203379]Part One - Sorran[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356#35253886]Part Two - Warrior[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356#35297818]Part Three - Besieged[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356#35673800]Part Four - Into Custody[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true#36184265]Part Five - Interrogated[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=2#36420291]Part Six - Assessment[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=2#36697145]Part Seven - Covert Extraction[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=2#37436099]Part Eight - To kill a Demon[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=3#37531866]Part Nine - Immortal Repentance[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=3#37685366]Part Ten - Insertion[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=3#37728386]Part Eleven - To show mercy[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=4#37912997]Part Twelve - Heresy, of the greatest kind[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=4#37970850]Part Thirteen - Trial and Punishment[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=5#38158685]Part Fourteen - Factions within Factions[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=6#38396722]Part Fifteen - The Truth[/url] [b]Book II[/b] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=7#39673575]Part Sixteen - Life goes on[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=7#39888838]Part Seventeen - Things never go according to plan[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=9#41709559]Part Eighteen - The sound of battle[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=10#43058906]Part Nineteen - Old habits die hard[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=10#43585008]Part Twenty - Cultural differences[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=11#49109093]Part Twenty One - Personified Death[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=12#50885734]Part Twenty Two - Breaking Point[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=14#51826058]Part Twenty Three - Turnabout[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=19#54241416]Part Twenty Four - Breaking free[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=21#55868885]Part Twenty Five - Mutiny[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=23#57570727]Part Twenty Six - Skirmishes, and Reflections[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=24#58101291]Part Twenty Seven - Shrouded Heresy[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=24#58896376]Part Twenty Eight - Signs and Portents[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=25#59170042]Part Twenty Nine -Parted Reunion[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=26#60763537]Part Thirty - Honour[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=29#62705377]Part Thirty One - Visitations to the past[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=30#63447045]Part Thirty Two - Loss concealed within victory[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=32#63843302]Part Thirty Three - The best intentions[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=34#64909520]Part Thirty Four -The Tower came crashing down.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=38#66761388]Part Thirty Five - Blood runs thick, brotherhood runs thicker.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=42#68771851]Part Thirty Six - For whom the bell tolls, for whom hell calls.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=45#70648196]Part Thirty Seven - Daggers in a cloak.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=50#73021323]Part Thirty Eight - Gods and their weapons.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=53#76375771]Part Thirty Nine - Trials of Delphi.[/url] [i]Next chapter ETA: Valve Time[/i] **** ***** ***** ****** ***** [b]Prologue[/b] [i]Edict of the Most High Prophet of Truth, 9th Age of Reclamation.[/i] By the authority of the noble Prophets of Truth, Regret, and Mercy. Henceforth, any and all battle worthy Sangheili are to be transferred from any idle posts in High Charity and/or upon any Covenant held world/ship into the active combat. Those amongst the excused are the Honour Guard, the Councillors, and the mentally ill, physically unfit, and the old. Female Sangheili are, as always, prohibited from taking part in any military action. Any Sangheili engaged in a guard post, other than the Honour Guard, will be replaced by the Jiralhanae until such a time as the High Council deems otherwise. Any Jiralhanae in question of where they now stand shall direct all enquiries to Tartarus, Chieftain of the Jirahanae. Failure to adhere to this edict will result in death. No exceptions. These are trying times, my brothers. The Human infidels persist in resisting the might of the Covenant. Rest assured, this 'war' as some are calling it, will be over soon -- to be forgotten and dismissed as an insignificant event in Covenant history. [Edited on 12.17.2012 5:35 PM PST]

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  • I love this story! When is the next part due? BTW I am confused, what armour is Zharn wearing right now? [Edited on 03.25.2012 9:00 AM PDT]

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] n008c4k [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Wolverfrog ...the actual novel itself is vastly under a publishable standard. Even now I don't think I'm at a level where I would consider pursuing publication of an original text.[/quote] [url=http://reasoningwithvampires.tumblr.com/tagged/capital_letters]Oh[/url] [url=http://reasoningwithvampires.tumblr.com/tagged/comma_abuse]really?[/url] [url=http://reasoningwithvampires.tumblr.com/search/comma]I[/url] [url=http://reasoningwithvampires.tumblr.com/tagged/Punctuation_Abuse]disagree.[/url] If crap like that can get published, I doubt you'll have any issues. For one, you use (almost always) proper grammar. Number two, you give characters this magical thing called [i]depth[/i]. You might have heard of it. It's when your characters aren't just generic cut-outs. And third, you're British. That seems to help for some reason.[/quote] He's right about the depth of the characters, I feel like I know them.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Wolverfrog ...the actual novel itself is vastly under a publishable standard. Even now I don't think I'm at a level where I would consider pursuing publication of an original text.[/quote] [url=http://reasoningwithvampires.tumblr.com/tagged/capital_letters]Oh[/url] [url=http://reasoningwithvampires.tumblr.com/tagged/comma_abuse]really?[/url] [url=http://reasoningwithvampires.tumblr.com/search/comma]I[/url] [url=http://reasoningwithvampires.tumblr.com/tagged/Punctuation_Abuse]disagree.[/url] If crap like that can get published, I doubt you'll have any issues. For one, you use (almost always) proper grammar. Number two, you give characters this magical thing called [i]depth[/i]. You might have heard of it. It's when your characters aren't just generic cut-outs. And third, you're British. That seems to help for some reason.

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  • You know, I could probably get my mom to put it into a book thing, she does stuff like scrapbooking and stuff all the time... I could send you a copy or something wolvers, you could have a little shelf with all of your novels on it or something... It would be pretty cool, you could let your friends borrow and read it and stuff

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  • I could try and get a version of the PDF with the right layout for one of those Make-your-own-hardcover-book sites. Or at least a paperback if possible. But only once I get my laptop running/get a new one. I hope I can at least retrieve my files.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] stupid0g [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] krnlcheese Think about all the canon it would destroy there would be no way that 343 would let Insurrection get published, although it's better than any of the other halo novels [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] stupid0g Earlier I said that he should publish insurrection, I think he could, it's certainly good enough, he just needs an editor and mabie an illustrator too draw some pictures for it, he might have to check with 343 industries, but anyways, I would certainly buy it.[/quote][/quote] Hmm... Yeah... Probably not, mabie he could just get someone to print it... If he's not making money off of it its not illegal...[/quote] I always fancied the idea of printing myself off a hard-cover copy of [i]Insurrection[/i] using one of those online services, because I don't have a single hard copy. I'm no good with formatting or anything like that though, so I dropped the idea. But no, real publishing is absolutely absurd as an idea. Not only would 343i never condone it in a million years, but the actual novel itself is vastly under a publishable standard. Even now I don't think I'm at a level where I would consider pursuing publication of an original text. That said, [url=http://www.amazon.co.uk/Pierson-Cumbria-Young-Writers-Award/dp/0951215698/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1332106960&sr=8-1]this[/url] will feature a short story from me in it, which will certainly be something nice to put on a university application/CV in the future. But that's just a county contest for writers under the age of eighteen. Actual publication's a whole other story. Anyway, back on topic. After getting over the depressingly awful end of Mass Effect 3, I'm back to it. I should have some time to work on the next chapter in the coming few weeks, so stay tuned. Thanks to all the new readers/lurkers who are just now posting. You might have been reading all along, but it's nice to know for sure these words aren't falling on unseeing eyes.

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  • I read the last part a while ago, and I have to say, it truly does keep getting better! You have once again given the plot certain unexpected twists that kept it all interesting, but still realistic (as far as that is possible in sci-fi fan-fiction). Even though my laptop is broken, I have been lurking here every day on my mobile phone. Never got around to posting before, though.

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  • With Wolvers you never know. [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] stupid0g Are they all going to finnally meet up next chapter??? Also, when do you think you will be done? Can't wait for more!!![/quote]

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  • Anyone? Hello?

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  • Are they all going to finnally meet up next chapter??? Also, when do you think you will be done? Can't wait for more!!! [Edited on 03.15.2012 1:29 PM PDT]

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  • interesting story. you should post this on 343 forums.

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  • Hey, a new chapter! I knew there was a reason I try to be here through all the business of these days. Great stuff. Although "short" to you isn't exactly very short... I thought I might be able to read through it quickly. Oh well. Nice to see you're doing this even through ME3.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] krnlcheese Think about all the canon it would destroy there would be no way that 343 would let Insurrection get published, although it's better than any of the other halo novels [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] stupid0g Earlier I said that he should publish insurrection, I think he could, it's certainly good enough, he just needs an editor and mabie an illustrator too draw some pictures for it, he might have to check with 343 industries, but anyways, I would certainly buy it.[/quote][/quote] Hmm... Yeah... Probably not, mabie he could just get someone to print it... If he's not making money off of it its not illegal...

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Wolverfrog I don't know what the last part's number will be, and I probably won't be doing Memoirs II again; this will in all likelihood by my last fan fiction. [/quote]End of an era.

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  • I started reading this two days ago, and I am in awe; I discovered this through a Google search for "halo ossoona" and wow, have I been rewarded more than I expected. This is amazing. Your literary skills are on a par with, if not reaching above and beyond, those of publishing writers. I have had the fortune to discover this now, reading all the chapters at will until this point. And I understand why you have such a following; I was held in suspense every step of the way. I'm awestruck. Congratulations, Wolvers. You are my favourite writer as of yet. :) Omicron [Edited on 03.11.2012 4:35 AM PDT]

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  • Think about all the canon it would destroy there would be no way that 343 would let Insurrection get published, although it's better than any of the other halo novels [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] stupid0g Earlier I said that he should publish insurrection, I think he could, it's certainly good enough, he just needs an editor and mabie an illustrator too draw some pictures for it, he might have to check with 343 industries, but anyways, I would certainly buy it.[/quote]

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  • [quote]this will in all likelihood by my last fan fiction.[/quote] *cue Darth Vader's "nooooooooooooooooooooooooo!"* Great chapter. The Imperial Admiral seems like a Grade-A bad***.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Wolverfrog Well, at its core it's a tale about three brothers in all but The [i]Halo[/i] universe is just a conduit and catalyst for the story; it's used as a tool, not a foundation. That core is the only constant - anything else is periphery, at least in my eyes. You'll see how things develop, until then keep wondering and thanks for reading.[/quote]Oh. Ok. I'll keep it in mind like I do with every other thing I'm dying to see.

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  • Earlier I said that he should publish insurrection, I think he could, it's certainly good enough, he just needs an editor and mabie an illustrator too draw some pictures for it, he might have to check with 343 industries, but anyways, I would certainly buy it. [Edited on 03.08.2012 10:41 PM PST]

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  • Your stories keep me sane on a daily basis... Thanks for all your hard work, I really appreciate all of your wonderful pieces of literature! Will sorran and savara finnally meet next chapter? [Edited on 03.08.2012 10:36 PM PST]

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  • Wow, just got up to where Restraint reveals the truth This is fuking amazing! It should be published nd made into a film. Thanks for an exhilarating read!

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  • Must continue reading your stories! :)

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  • Well, at its core it's a tale about three brothers in all but blood and how their lives are changed forever by events greater than them, how they struggle against adversity to rise to the challenge these events present and retain their friendship amidst it all. The [i]Halo[/i] universe is just a conduit and catalyst for the story; it's used as a tool, not a foundation. That core is the only constant - anything else is periphery, at least in my eyes. You'll see how things develop, until then keep wondering and thanks for reading.

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  • At last! 46 pages, more than 8-9 dedicated hours of non-stop reading and I have to say, this was one of the greatest reads I have ever endeavored!! Now I'm wondering, Who is friend and who is foe? Is this a tragedy? Although it may seem like one, surely there will be an ending that links up with the Heretics in Halo 2 (as most Elites were in shock when they found out, many honor guard Elites committed suicide, and the Heretics are the only ones who would be prepared to handle the news)? Will Thel Vadam learn of these events? [Edited on 03.08.2012 1:44 PM PST]

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  • Oh yes.

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  • I've just read up to part 8 and I'm loving the parallels between Sorran and Jul (the Elite in Glasslands), which is surprising since you wrote this years ago. Well written!! [Edited on 03.08.2012 5:14 AM PST]

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