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[Novel] True Sangheili (Part 39 available!) ~ 18 December
SCHOLAR, SOLDIER, HERETIC... SAVIOUR.
At first, the life of a warrior in the Covenant army seems a noble one. But are the motives behind the war with the humans as innocent as the Sangheili, Sorran, believes? An act of heresy unveils a conspiracy spanning thousands of years, which could bring about the total ruin of the Covenant.
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True Sangheili[/i], from the fan fiction author of [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=31052475]Halo 3: Insurrection[/url] and [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=27927918]Memoirs of an ODST[/url].
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==[b]CHAPTER LISTING[/b]==[/u]
[b]Book I[/b] ([url=http://docs.google.com/fileview?id=0B4iUh3dauqsjN2QzMjBjYzQtZGE2Ny00ZDUzLThlZTQtNDIwMDJjYTBjNTk3&hl=en]PDF[/url])
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356#35203356]Prologue + Chapter list[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356#35203379]Part One - Sorran[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356#35253886]Part Two - Warrior[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356#35297818]Part Three - Besieged[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356#35673800]Part Four - Into Custody[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true#36184265]Part Five - Interrogated[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=2#36420291]Part Six - Assessment[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=2#36697145]Part Seven - Covert Extraction[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=2#37436099]Part Eight - To kill a Demon[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=3#37531866]Part Nine - Immortal Repentance[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=3#37685366]Part Ten - Insertion[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=3#37728386]Part Eleven - To show mercy[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=4#37912997]Part Twelve - Heresy, of the greatest kind[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=4#37970850]Part Thirteen - Trial and Punishment[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=5#38158685]Part Fourteen - Factions within Factions[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=6#38396722]Part Fifteen - The Truth[/url]
[b]Book II[/b]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=7#39673575]Part Sixteen - Life goes on[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=7#39888838]Part Seventeen - Things never go according to plan[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=9#41709559]Part Eighteen - The sound of battle[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=10#43058906]Part Nineteen - Old habits die hard[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=10#43585008]Part Twenty - Cultural differences[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=11#49109093]Part Twenty One - Personified Death[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=12#50885734]Part Twenty Two - Breaking Point[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=14#51826058]Part Twenty Three - Turnabout[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=19#54241416]Part Twenty Four - Breaking free[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=21#55868885]Part Twenty Five - Mutiny[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=23#57570727]Part Twenty Six - Skirmishes, and Reflections[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=24#58101291]Part Twenty Seven - Shrouded Heresy[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=24#58896376]Part Twenty Eight - Signs and Portents[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=25#59170042]Part Twenty Nine -Parted Reunion[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=26#60763537]Part Thirty - Honour[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=29#62705377]Part Thirty One - Visitations to the past[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=30#63447045]Part Thirty Two - Loss concealed within victory[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=32#63843302]Part Thirty Three - The best intentions[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=34#64909520]Part Thirty Four -The Tower came crashing down.[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=38#66761388]Part Thirty Five - Blood runs thick, brotherhood runs thicker.[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=42#68771851]Part Thirty Six - For whom the bell tolls, for whom hell calls.[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=45#70648196]Part Thirty Seven - Daggers in a cloak.[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=50#73021323]Part Thirty Eight - Gods and their weapons.[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=53#76375771]Part Thirty Nine - Trials of Delphi.[/url]
[i]Next chapter ETA: Valve Time[/i]
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[b]Prologue[/b]
[i]Edict of the Most High Prophet of Truth, 9th Age of Reclamation.[/i]
By the authority of the noble Prophets of Truth, Regret, and Mercy.
Henceforth, any and all battle worthy Sangheili are to be transferred from any idle posts in High Charity and/or upon any Covenant held world/ship into the active combat. Those amongst the excused are the Honour Guard, the Councillors, and the mentally ill, physically unfit, and the old. Female Sangheili are, as always, prohibited from taking part in any military action.
Any Sangheili engaged in a guard post, other than the Honour Guard, will be replaced by the Jiralhanae until such a time as the High Council deems otherwise. Any Jiralhanae in question of where they now stand shall direct all enquiries to Tartarus, Chieftain of the Jirahanae.
Failure to adhere to this edict will result in death. No exceptions. These are trying times, my brothers. The Human infidels persist in resisting the might of the Covenant. Rest assured, this 'war' as some are calling it, will be over soon -- to be forgotten and dismissed as an insignificant event in Covenant history.
[Edited on 12.17.2012 5:35 PM PST]
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] steadman [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Axe11154 sht[/quote] Unnecessary post, relatively spammy. Please stop it. Anyway, I have just Steadited (suck it, Alex) the first chapter of Wolvers' new story, and I can say without a doubt that it is going to be very good. Once we are both online at the same point, we will discuss a few things I noticed in the early draft and will then post it. The story will be set in a relatively untouched time in the Haloverse and from an unusual character's perspective; in first person too. Here's a teaser: [quote]"I've done this before," I replied coolly, strapping my seatbelt in. The woman up front chuckled, and poked her head around the seat to face me, allowing me to get a closer look at her. She seemed to be in her early fifties, although in this day and age it was possible she was probably closer to eighty. Tinted sunglasses masked her eyes, even though it was pitch black outside. She wore a tight fitting black garment and was staring at me with a look so intense that it could probably burn a hole straight through the hull of a UNSC frigate.[/quote][/quote] 1 you've sorta been up tight lately dude. chill out. Your making some people a little mad. (mainly me) 2You just ruined the surprise for me. 3. I guess presents arn't WF thing so I will take mine down early tomorrow. seeing as most dont like it.
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Axe11154 sht[/quote] Unnecessary post, relatively spammy. Please stop it. Anyway, I have just Steadited (suck it, Alex) the first chapter of Wolvers' new story, and I can say without a doubt that it is going to be very good. Once we are both online at the same point, we will discuss a few things I noticed in the early draft and will then post it. The story will be set in a relatively untouched time in the Haloverse and from an unusual character's perspective; in first person too. Here's a teaser: [quote]"I've done this before," I replied coolly, strapping my seatbelt in. The woman up front chuckled, and poked her head around the seat to face me, allowing me to get a closer look at her. She seemed to be in her early fifties, although in this day and age it was possible she was probably closer to eighty. Tinted sunglasses masked her eyes, even though it was pitch black outside. She wore a tight fitting black garment and was staring at me with a look so intense that it could probably burn a hole straight through the hull of a UNSC frigate.[/quote]
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sht good find thow [Edited on 11.16.2010 2:53 PM PST]
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[url=http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Peter_David]We are talking about the same guy, I fear...[/url] Use the search function (Ctrl + F) to look for 'Fable' and you'll see.
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] AssaultCommand He only became a very popular writer/comic book maker creating The Incredible Hulk and other such stuff.[/quote] what no Im talking about the other Peter David.
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He was this huge Fan fic writer on the Fable forums. He was so good Newyork times gave him a deal to write his own Book for fable 3. He is the most successful Fanfic maker of this time. If you bought the limited addition of fable 3 it would come with it. Hes sorta rich now but he still rights for us on the Fable forums.
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He only became a very popular writer/comic book maker working on The Incredible Hulk and other such stuff like Star Trek episodes [Edited on 11.16.2010 2:21 PM PST]
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What happened to Peter David? :P
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Axe11154 I hope what happened to Peter David happens to WF does any one agree [/quote]As long as he doesn't grow as fat and gives me preview versions of his books when he goes pro with his writing, I agree.
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I hope what happened to Peter David happens to WF does any one agree
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I know that you guys no longer respect me for good reasons, but I still respect you guys. So like everyone else I'm pretty fricken excited about this "New Story", but make the next chapter for this ASAP. Your stories are like a drug, I'm addicted.
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Ktan Dantaktee When I first met you I liked chating to you. if you needed more readers you coulda just PM me and I would of gladly got my friends to read your story. But now Im not so sure. And I did'nt comment when you got black listed because I dont know what the hell it was and did'nt wana bug any one with questions. Last I know I said I would take down that fanfic on this fanfic but I want to make sure WF has read it as it is his present and It wouldn't be right taking it from him before he has opened it.
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What you could do is write like three or four chapters of your new story, and post like one a week or one every two weeks so that you can always try and stay ahead. So even if you get writers block for it you still have a couple of chapters lying in wait to stave off the wait. But whatever you decide to do, I can't wait to read it :D Morally challenged characters FTW.
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Mr Evil 37 Wolvers has just been lucky.[/quote] My cliffhangers keep 'em coming back. My constant, evil cliffhangers. ;) Anyway, I'm thinking of running another story alongside True Sangheili, as I'm the sort of writer who writes best when challenged with running multiple stories. It's also useful when I've got writer's block with one as I can just leap to the other. I've already got the first chapter done and I'm loving writing it. It's my first return to first person since Memoirs but with a deeper, more complex character with stronger motives. You won't like him at first. I'll think about posting the first chapter. Possibly. I'm finding it hard to keep it contained to myself.
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Where you're going wrong is that you are writing to get people to read it, not for the enjoyment of the act of writing itself. Myself, AJ and Wolvers for example are all writers of equal skill, but myself and AJ don't get many readers (well I write original stuff so can't post it here), but we don't mind because we LOVE just writing for the sake of it. Wolvers has just been lucky. But yeah, back on topic. True Sangheili is awesome. [Edited on 11.16.2010 10:25 AM PST]
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We don't hate you, we just don't respect you anymore. Act sensible, learn your English and don't pull of such lame and low jokes and our respect for you may just build up again, albeit slower than before. Anyway, lets stop this conversation before Wolverfrog's topic gets locked. If that happens, nobody will forgive you. [i]Ever[/i].
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I know, I've lost respect for myself. And it was a JOKE. You guys have lost respect for me, I'm being low and childish, and you guys will never forget or forgive me. This really does suck. And I've asked on my story thread for people to comment MULTIPLE times, and asking people to read my thread would be just plain desperate. This was a JOKE. I was going to pull it on FTZ, but after how serious and hateful you guys were/are, I decided not to. Looks like I'll have to come back here in a few months after you guys stop hating me for a simple joke.
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I've lost all faith in this forum... Ktan, you are absolutely pathetic. In fact, this is the lowest thing I've seen in the Gallery since GruntKilla copied Mandalore's fan fics, you're being childish and stupid. You can't expect everyone to read your stuff and comment on it, if that's what you're here to do then you may as well leave because it doesn't work like that. I have a grand total of about 4 readers, I don't care because they're all friends on the site who will tell me honestly what's good and what sucked about my work. I don't give a damn about catering to the masses, as you're trying to do. You really don't deserve the amount of readers you get, the vast majority of people here will say "keep it up" or "great chapter", if that's all you're after then I really don't know why you're here. You have 84 comments in your hot topic, what more do you want? You've lost my respect, you could have simply asked us politely to read and comment on your story but instead you chose to sink to a new low. Congrats.
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I'm not blaming it on anyone, I'm just making an apology. And I think my next story will be more popular after Helljumpers Section 1 is done. I'm just getting started, and the next one will be MUCH more well written. And expect some HJs characters to be in it. TL;DR Not blaming, just apologizing.
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Ktan Dantaktee And yes I deseve SLIGHT punishment, but NOBODY reads my latest chapters. You guys didn't even notice I was blacklisted, my entire story was hidden and nobody commented, since they weren't looking at my story. You guys comment when WF gets blacklisted, you would comment if kingwrench got B-listed. Sure you guys probably would since they write better stories and are more popular, but a comment once in a while would be nice, I got desperate. Sorry for the quite off topic post but I had to explain myself.[/quote][b]Pro-tip:[/b] [i]When making alts, don't use similar names, and try to use better or even worse spelling and acronyms so you don't draw to much attention to yourself.[/i] The reason we post to some topics when people get blacklisted is because the writer has earned it. They've managed to write chapters even at times when there weren't a lot of people reading the story. Also, most people don't read 3 or 4 stories at the same time, and when I also have to spend a lot of time on school, that decreases to 1 and the occasional story I read when I come across it. I'm not saying you don't deserve more readers or anything like that, I'm just saying you need more patience. With patience, and good chapters, you will earn readers, but don't try to get more replies using such [u]low[/u] methods. Sure it feels rewarding to get replies, but sometimes a story is not very original, exciting or realistic enough to be enjoyable. Bad spelling and grammar also ruin the joy of reading, as people sometimes use completely unrelated words that only sound a bit the same. In that case, they should complete their education first, or take an additional course of the English language. If one of these is the case and the write fails to better them, more and more people will start forgetting to read the story or just plainly avoid it. In your case, you were lucky to receive so many replies on the first few chapters that you've grown used to it. If you don't get as many replies anymore, you feel like you're not doing enough or you'll blame it on the readers. Blaming it on the readers is never a good thing to do, all this does is make them detest you and/or your work. Also, if you don't get a lot of replies, it doesn't necessarily mean that you don't have a lot of readers, it just means they either don't want to comment, can't comment (time issues, school, etc.) or forget to comment. [b]tl;dr[/b]: [i]Sorry, this option is not available at this wall.[/i] [Edited on 11.16.2010 7:38 AM PST]
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Axe11154 [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Hkad Manteanee Yes I was.[/quote] oh and Mr Evil 37 is right and the proof is in the name just look at the 2 and you will see what I mean Ktan Dantakee Hkad Manteanee both start with 4 random letters 3rd letter is the same both spell ant after the 5th letter both have a before the 3rd to last letter and both end with double E [/quote] A double e at the end of an Elite's name means he serve/served in the Covenant's millitary, and they weren't very random letters, it not like I just went G'jfk. I worked hard on those names and you called them random! I think I'm going to cry.:'( And yes I deseve SLIGHT punishment, but NOBODY reads my latest chapters. You guys didn't even notice I was blacklisted, my entire story was hidden and nobody commented, since they weren't looking at my story. You guys comment when WF gets blacklisted, you would comment if kingwrench got B-listed. Sure you guys probably would since they write better stories and are more popular, but a comment once in a while would be nice, I got desperate. Sorry for the quite off topic post but I had to explain myself.
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] random no337 I hate to say it man, but I don't think the reception's going to be good....this is not something you should EVER do. EDIT: Obviously in response to the above post[/quote] Oh .... ...... ........ .......... Ill get rid of it then after I get back from school
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back on topic did you see my present WF I under stand if you wana get rid of it. All you need to do is say it and it will disappear.
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Well, I'm a little disappointed in you, Ktan, if it really is you. I could sort of understand if I'd done something wrong but to my knowledge I've done nothing except encourage you. The depths to which some will sink...
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Hkad Manteanee Yes I was.[/quote] oh and Mr Evil 37 is right and the proof is in the name just look at the 2 and you will see what I mean Ktan Dantakee Hkad Manteanee both start with 4 random letters 3rd letter is the same both spell ant after the 5th letter both have a before the 3rd to last letter and both end with double E GUARDS SEND THIS ONE TO THE DUNGEON. [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Hkad Manteanee I am Ktan Dantakee trying to make Wolverfrog feel bad with rude comments. I will now run off in fear of torture. and please never read my story again for I do not deserve readers for what I have done. Wolverfrog my fate if in your hands. [/quote] lol that part was a joke but you get the point that I dont like lairs trying to hide them selves as crocs .
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Hkad Manteanee Eh, I think Helljumpers is better, now if Ktan could just get un-banned. But this story good nonetheless, so come up with that chapter when you can.[/quote] A few things: You are in three of the same groups as Ktan, the author of helljumpers, despite your account being a day old. In one of them, both the ranks of you and this other person are 'fleetmaster.' This sounds like a name for a mod/ admin, not a title that should be given to a new user. Secondly, you posted the comment in ktan's thread saying that it was great [i]after he got banned[/i], this is impossible... unless you are the same person. Now this is concrete enough for me to link you two together, most likely as the same person. Now, it is great that you think your story is better, but do not hide behind a slight mist and glass, this was obvious and pathetic, you are above this. All you needed to do to get some extra readers and feedback (which you seem to be fishing for) is PM a few people, the regulars here (Wolvers, Aj, Mr. Evil, Assault Command, me and a few others)and ask for input; or simply a post complimenting the author of a story and asking for people to read yours. Yes, these both seem kind of needy, but it is nowhere near the level of asshattery that you partook. Now please don't do this again.
