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5/10/2015 3:00:56 AM
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Domitoris Awakening Epilogue
Hello. This is the conclusion to a fanfiction about an Exo named Ithamar. It takes place primarily near the end of the Golden Age. The cast includes many other characters such as Charles, Jk-Bx, Max, Henry, Cicatrix, John, and many others. Ithamar works with a security team that escorts a ambassador to various locales such as the city of Charlemagne on Mars, colonies throughout the galaxy, and a secret meteor base where the ambassador lives. Though it isn't long before trouble makes its way into their lives and the beginning of the end is at hand when the team faces new enemies that they haven't encountered and aren't prepared for them. where the future leads is anyone's guess. Thank you for reading. Comments and Feedback are welcome.
[spoiler]If the name "Domitoris" reminds you "Doritos", that's okay because hey make a good snack while reading.[/spoiler]
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yqQfBxQDslPVBij5gwI9icBwVvh3avOt10ROqKHAnQQ/pub
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6 RepliesEdited by SaviorsBlood: 5/10/2015 3:58:08 PMWell, that was an excellent read, both concerning material and form. The style you used in the first half was indeed unique and conveniently described the events leading from Ithamar's service pre-Collapse up until now when mankind is pursuing reclamation. I have to say the perspective that was used there intrigues me as well. Someone's recounting their journey through galaxies. The only question is who? Ithamar or Charles? As for the second part, this Volec seems like an interesting character choice. He's not a soldier, but I believe he will prove to be just as important to the welfare of this team in conception as the operatives. I wonder what Charles is searching for. I already know he's staying alert to find something. Perhaps an old friend. Only time will tell with the next installment to your story. Great read and keep up the good work. Oh, and I think Doritos can be delicious. Especially the BBQ or Tapatio.
