Still doesn't make it real. You did an amazing job. But it's still not real. It'll only be real in the games story if Bungie makes it real. And they haven't yet. So no matter how good of a writer you are it is still not part of the game. I think it is a good explanation to why the Hunters didn't fight. But until they release more info on why they didn't we will never know whether it was cowardice or if there was a good reason why they didn't fight. Again I'm not bashing your writing or story you did a superb job and are a very good writer.