It's one of those catch 22 things where if I were being published there would be an editor to help clean it all up---but without having it cleaned up it's hard to get published. And I mean, I don't exist according to any of these companies so there's that. It's be [i]cool[/i] to make some money off of it, sure. But it's impossible to get in to write for these companies unless you've won a few awards or otherwise are highly visible to begin with. Maybe one day. In the meantime, you make a great point; the Halo novel was written/planned/edited by only one person (and some help from a few friends). With a professional editor's touch, could be awesome. One day! You seem to have a keen eye, though. If you get a chance, read through the rest of it and let me know what you think! Always looking for feedback. (I'm one of those wierdos who actually likes it.)