Sweet gameplay, its cool to see a girl tearing it up in the crucible. A few tips for you, not that I am the king or anything but maybe I can help you out. Play more melow music over your gameplays. I am not a fan of metal but that does not mean metal is bad music. Its just that it is a kind of selective music you either like it or you don't and you wouldn't want to lose views on a good gameplay like this because of your music choice (just my thought). Honestly your play looked really solid, you can see that you are very aware and know very well how to work the spawns. My only critique would be not really on your gameplay but on your game type choice. You can tell that your knowledge of Rumble is far above average and it really isn't fair for me to say that you should play more team based game types because I have not seen a gameplay of you in one. But I am going to say you should anyways, I think if you played Control a bit more then came back to Rumble later on you would really notice an improvement in that intangible, that may improve you as a player even more. Just my thoughts, keep up the good work girl.