originally posted in:The Black Garden
One Little Bullet Part 1
[b]Guardian File: Find Guardian 83 Log......Complete.
Guardian Log 1: Begin Transmission......Complete.
::// This is Don reporting in on my first Guardian Log.
::// I guess I'm supposed to write about my daily crap I have to
::// do around the tower.
::// Life as a Guardian is the most boring thing ever, well it is if you
::// have to do the garbage I do.
::// Let me explain I have to search the city for, wait for it, pesky little
::// stinkin' thieves.
::// I guess it does have its entertaining parts to it.
::// For example, last week some guy stealing a pike tried to kill me
::// with his fricken' poisoned frog he kept asking me to eat.
::// Well I guess it's not as bad as that guy who tried to kill me with a
::// machete.
::// Can you believe that?
::// He tried to kill me with a scrawny machete. (laughs)
::// People these days.
Guardian Log 1: End Transmission......Complete.
Guardian Log 24: Begin transmission......Complete.
6 Months Later......
::// Hey I'm back!
::// Oh you'll never believe what happened today!
::// Maybe you will.
::// Go ahead guess.
::// Oh whatever I'll just tell you.
::// Command finally sent me on my first mission!
::// It was amazing.
::// First we were dropped off and there were explosions
::// and helicopters and we killed some cabal(By the way I got
::// the most kills) and It was just amazing.
::// I hope I get to go on more missions.
Guardian log 24: End Transmission......Complete.
[ No, No, No! Enough of this garbage take me to before the incident!]
Guardian File: Request To See Log 77......Request Denied.
Guardian file: Password required.
Guardian file: Password//Hope//......Access Granted.
Guardian file: Accessing Guardian File 77......Complete.
1 Year And 4 Months Later......
::// This is mission log 77lfdksa;a;aggggghsois
Todaaaaaay i went on another mission.
:/?ff,l We wher on a mission To save A GRoUpE of civilians?
It wassimple all we had to do was get in and getout.. of the cabal camp with the civili--ans.
We got in quick,,, found the civians/////// with out any one noticing.
but on the Way out we got into a large figght. The transporttttts were already there, all wehad to doo was gET the civilians to them
there werEEEee too mannnny four civilainssss got boxed in by cabal. we took the cabal out and got them
in the transport. We were about to leave wHen weee noticed we were missing SomEone, alittle 8 year o987 old girl. i looke d for her but there were too many... i still looked as i fouggggght then i saw her and
write next to her was an explosive canister. i didnt realized i was still
shooting at the cabal and as i ran toward her, one little bullet hit the canister, my bullet. and Sheee faded away...
Guardian Log 77: End Transmission......Complete.
Guardian File: Locate Guardian 83......Complete
Guardian File: Location Unknown
[ Calling all Guardians. You are to find guardian 83 and terminate him]
End File......Complete.
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This was really good, looking forward to a part 2 (if there will be)
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Really cool storytelling, needs more detail and a little shallow, but overall pretty good. Does Gaurdian 83 survive?
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I bet u work for bungie and that was a small spoiler...password hope lol ill remember that
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Interesting style. A little short. Needs more detail. Overall not bad. You just need to elaborate on the details.
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Hope you like. If you do i'll make a part two.