originally posted in:The Black Garden
My first story in the life of the Exo Iven Harahd, one day to be a Warlock, but not yet a Guardian. Merely a footsoldier in special forces.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xXQT1ax_9eRRKjniMBvdNMi73Qb3gslAEeR900tA1Vc/edit
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Good job. Much more realistic than the other stories ive read
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Thought it was sweet man. Keep up the good work.
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That was awesome write more if it
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That was very awesome! I love the approach from the common soldier rather than a Guardian's viewpoint.
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Amazing! I love it and I want more! It was very well written!
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That was well written [i]and[/i] originally structured!
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Loved the morning person-masochist comment. Very well done.
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Great story, it's much better than what the title lets on.
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Read this earlier today its epic.
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Awesome story, my only question is when you took the gun from the female awokens pack, was that Kaede Dorian, or someone else